The story is called Turning the Key, and the summary is below:
Inspired by Open Your Heart-Madonna
Kiki Owens is the sexiest dancer in the club. Prince Levi is the biggest player in the city. When these two meet, it's like magic. Kiki sees it, but it takes Prince a lot of convincing that Kiki is different from the "others" he's dated. Kiki makes a bet with Prince that he'd be in love with her without seeing her dance at the strip club, and she will not take him to see her dance until he does. Prince doubts that he'd be in love, but will he open his heart by turning the key?
What I'm hoping to get out of this is some advice. I mean, I already have a chapter of this written, so if you want to take a look at that, I'll post it. I just want to know what I can do.
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