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I've reviewed:

Hope
Calypso
The Biting Game: Alice's Story
Writing Gooder

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Just another update on the Honorable Contest Reviews and Entries:

Wanderlust -- needs 1 review
I want to be punished no more, Daddy. -- needs 3 reviews
Flares -- needs 3 reviews
All I See Is A World Torn By War -- needs 2 reviews
The Biting Game: Alice's Story. -- needs 2 reviews
The Fluke Kingdom -- needs 3 reviews

Knights eligible for the MC3 badge: @Jonathan, @niteowl, @HomeschooledTeen, @fortis, @Hannah, @BlackNether12, @Rydia


Pieces that have already received the 3 promised reviews, but are still eligible to be reviewed if Knights want to become eligible for the Main Challenge Badge:

Spoiler! :
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=102916
A Cowardly Pandora
Calypso
Benjamin Bumblebee
Hope.
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I did one on flares, but I forgot to "Proclaim" is as such. oops.
Flares
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

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My tokens of service for new challenges I've attempted:
Spoiler! :
I humbly request that a sword be bequeathed upon me for completion of the requirements to bear a blade. Here are my tokens of service:
11: Bad Pick Up Lines and Jokes
12: I Cry When I Laugh
13: Life Cycle
14: The Life of an Assassin - Intro & Ch. 1
15: Bye Bye, Big Blue
For my shield:
16: Part One
17: Ravenwood Investigations Part 1
18: Stalking- sometimes it's good...
19: Reality is Fantasy
20: "Re-birthing"
For my helmet:
21: How Long
22: Longing
23: In My Way
24: Foxtrot
25: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 5
For my horse:
26: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Three (Bird)
27: Eternal Sunshine
28: The Key to Autus, Chap. 1 & 2
29: Just Another Love Scene That May Never Happen Again
30: What The Winter Brings...
31: Books and Music Saved My Life
32: symbiosis
33: Sad Life
34: David, David, What Have You Done For Us?
35: The Alder King
For my Full Armor:
36: A Little Demon at Camp part 1
37: It's funny how sickness seeps into the body
38: "Me"
39: Broken
40: I am Not Malala
41: Ch 1 - Ch 3
42: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Four (Bride and the Balcony)
43: Rain.
44: P.S. I love you
45: Elementary to High school
For my Jousting Lance,
46: The Head, Part 2. BRACE YOURSELVES
47: Sempiternal- Chapter One
48: The Beast
49: Noting the Difference: Creeper vs Stalker
50: Homework
51: Behavior Problems (The Bad Child Ep. 1)
52: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Five (Priest on Fire​​)
53: Just In Case You Thought This World Was A Fair One
54: Clearly, You Are Not A Writer!
55: Doom Making It's Way.
For my Coat of Arms,
56: That's The Way I Am.
57: The Head Part 3/3 The End and Epilogue
58: Where the Sun Goes Down
59: entanglement
60: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 7
61: Beginnings part 1
62: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Six (Pig Child)
63: Little Dragon, written when I was ten years old.
64: Nights of despair
65: Peace
66: Make me a sun
67: A gentle fear.
68: Bare and Broken, Locked and Stolen
69: Count On Me.
70: Fenton's Lady ch. 1
71: The Diary and The Girl
72: "Too Late
73: Forget Me Not
74: Chapter One: Festival/Joy/Challenge
75: The Assassin- Part 3
76: Angel (Chapter 1)
77: Twelve Years: Just One More
78: Rebuilding Thunder: Chapter 1
79: rippling
80: In Debt
81: The Hulk Over Driehel
82: I'm Sorry
83: Network of Keys Chapter 2: Cynthia, Coming Out of the Closet
84: Network of Keys Chapter 3: Ky, First Words (Redoing)
85: This is a Test
86: a sickle in the dust
87: My Worst Week (Part 4)
88: Writing my plight (knives and pens)
89: A Week For the World: Day 1 :Part 1
90: The Circle of Life (in the key of Em)
91: The Feeling of Meh
92: The Ghost
93: The Key to Autus, Chapter 3-4
94: Noting the Difference: Geek vs Nerd
95: Paper Girl
96: Detachment
97: The Life of an Assassin - Ch. 2
98: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Seven (Sweet and Sour)
99: Shoes
100: What Happened to the Time
For a Jeweled Chalice,
101: End of Messages
102: Chasing Dragons- Chapter Two
103: castaway
104: Why my flag is black.
105: I am
106: Four Foot Three
107: caesura
108: The Chronicles of Xaba: Part One
109: The Dawn of Winter (Remastered)
110: I Cannot Speak For I Have Lost Words.
111: Taking Flight (Part Two)
112: The Ring of Time--The Ring of the Future
113: These are the Children
114: Mayday Chapter 1
115: Paxton Chapter one
116: Paxton Chapter Two
117: Mayday Chapter 2
118: Mayday chapter 3
119: Paxton Chapter three
120: The Ring
121: Stretching Time
122: Minds are opened only when hearts are opened!
123: Runaway Minds
124: Don't You Mistake Us
125: 29 Capitol Limited
126: Innocence
127: In Love Again
128: Where in the world?
129: The Chronicles of Xaba: Part One (Take Two)
130: The Key of Autus, Chap. 5-6
131: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Eight (Burning with Desire)
132: Mysterious Ways (chapter 1)
133: Who is the King of the Playground?
134: scriptless
135: No More Apologies
136: Life Moves On
137: Living Weapons: Chapter One
138: Your Words Will Change The World
139: Where I am From
140: Envy, Anger, Destruction
141: Taking Flight (Part Three)
142: Angel (Chapter 2)
143: story success
144: The Cursed Ashi
145: Paradise
146: Dreamt?Great.. Now go do it!
147: Life is a journey
148: Constellation of thoughts
149: 188-396
150: Untitled Work 5
For a Chest of Silver,
151: For Griffypoo
152: A Woman's World.
153: Palm Reading
154: Twerk (A Poem From A Rapper's Point of View)
155: Jonathon Six (Sneak-Peek Part One)
156: Leprosy
157: Nothing Sweet
158: This, My Excavation
159: Extinguisher
160: Children of the Forest - Part 1: Prologue
161: Run And Hide. (Edited)
162: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 13
163: Sheridan Holmes: A Cold Case PART 12
164: Living Weapons: Prologue
165: Re-peat
166: Tricks
167: Pokemon Diamond Destinies - Chapter 1 Part 1:The Adventure Continues
168: Welcome To Hell
169: CK-P1: Chapter 8:
170: What day is it?
171: Inhuman
172: The Veda of Pablo- Book 1- Fathers
173: KotGR review battle #1 Chapter 1
174: Adventures at Evening (experimentation with iambic pentameter)
175: Perfect: Chapter 1
176: Total Technology Takeover
177: Technology Now and Then
178: Technology for a Better Future
179: Technology on the Other Side
180: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 8.
181: Paxton Chapter Four
182: Rebuilding Thunder Chapter 2
183: What Life Means To Me?
184: The Cycle
185: Friends Reunited
186: They'll Never Know Any Hope
187: Too demanding?!
188: The Key of Autus, chapters 7-8
189: Technology; Molding the Future
190: The Imaginers
191: i can't love after you.
192: Think Like a Dude Entry #4
193: Persephone's Lament
194: Start to a story - Nature's Finest
195: That one story...that isn't done
196: A Stroll Amidst Seasons
197: Network of Keys Chapter 4: Cynthia, The Next Morning
198: Friend or Foe?
199: Reaf
200: Strengths of the U.S. Constitution & Government System
For a Chest of Gold:
201: Paxton Chapter Five
202: Ennui (The Media Center)
203:
204:
205:
206:
207:
208:
209:
210:

In pursuit of land,
Many series there be, yet none as yet meet the requirements. So here are the series I am currently following.

Elegy of Flight:
1: Elegy of Flight: Chapter One (Did you hear?)
2: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Two (Elegie)
3: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Three (Bird)
4: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Four (Bride and the Balcony)
5: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Five (Priest on Fire​​)
6: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Six (Pig Child)
7: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Seven (Sweet and Sour)
8: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Eight (Burning with Desire)

Paxton:
1: Paxton Chapter one
2: Paxton Chapter Two
3: Paxton Chapter three
4: Paxton Chapter Four
5: Paxton Chapter Five

Mayday:
1: Mayday Chapter 1
2: Mayday Chapter 2
3: Mayday chapter 3

Network of Keys:
1: Network of Keys Chapter One: Cynthia, Volunteers (Redone)
2: Network of Keys Chapter 2: Cynthia, Coming Out of the Closet
3: Network of Keys Chapter 3: Ky, First Words (Redoing)
4: Network of Keys Chapter 4: Cynthia, The Next Morning

The Life of an Assassin:
1: The Life of an Assassin - Intro & Ch. 1
2: The Life of an Assassin - Ch. 2

Part One:
1: Part One

The Book of Livia:
1: The book of Livia Chapter 1 I did it again

The Key to Autus:
1: The Key to Autus, Chap. 1 & 2
2: The Key to Autus, Chapter 3-4
3: The Key of Autus, Chap. 5-6
4: The Key of Autus, chapters 7-8

The Head:
1: The Head.
2: The Head, Part 2. BRACE YOURSELVES
3: The Head Part 3/3 The End and Epilogue

The Bad Child:
1: Behavior Problems (The Bad Child Ep. 1)

Beginnings:
1: Beginnings part 1

Fenton's Lady:
1: Fenton's Lady ch. 1


Completed Challenges:

For the Head of a Wild Boar badge,
Reality is Fantasy

For the Badge of the Shrubbery,
In My Way

For the Village Badge,
Elegy of Flight:
1: Elegy of Flight: Chapter One (Did you hear?)
2: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Two (Elegie)
3: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Three (Bird)
4: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Four (Bride and the Balcony)
5: Elegy of Flight: Chapter Five (Priest on Fire​​)

For the Town Badge,
The Head:
1: The Head.
2: The Head, Part 2. BRACE YOURSELVES
3: The Head Part 3/3 The End and Epilogue


Contest Reviews:
1: Foxtrot
2: A Cowardly Pandora
3: Calypso
4: Hope.
5: 10 Extremely Helpful Tips to Surviving (Most of) High School


For future service completions I will update on this post. After all, a Knight must be a good steward of their respective environment.
In loyal service,
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With courage Squire Malachi approaches the Knights of the green room. He receives his squire duties and plunges into them with vigor. within hours he has completed the first of his quests. In the following days he complete the next eight.

finally, after at last he completes his tenth and final mission, he begins the journey back, only to be confused of the way back. He trusts his horse Caballo de Fuego, to lead him through the dark forest of confusion.

At last he trees thin and he emerges upon a plain of green grass. In the distance he sights a tall green tower, surrounded by smaller buildings of the same colors. He urges his horse forward, and weary and battle-scarred, but victorious, he gives Knight Hannah his list of completed tasks, with a bow.


Review #1 The Pack - Chapter Two

Review #2 The Death Of Zeus

Review #3 Can You Grasp It In Your Hand?

Review #4 I see the patience of Chinars in winter...

Review #5 I Wanted to Say

Review #6 Fictional Letters: Anomie's first letter to Tioni

Review #7 Break My Heart

Review #8 White Noise - Prologue

Review #9 A small scenery on earth.

Review #10 A Night to Remember - Chapter 4



Malachi takes off his silver helmet. He awaits Hannah's response somewhat nervously. His horse nudges him on the shoulder. Malachi gets the message.

Chill, your about to become a knight. Good thing you've got such an awesome horse or you wouldn't be here.

Malachi nods, smiling wide now.

Horses. Just don't get full of yourself.
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Spoiler! :
1. Rain (Rain.)
2. P.S I love you (P.S. I love you)
3. Unexpected (Unexpected)
4. Of flesh and blood (of flesh and blood -)
5. Barber shop pleasantries (Barber Shop Pleasantries)
6. Just In Case You Thought This World Was A Fair One (Just In Case You Thought This World Was A Fair One)
7. Is it a Dream? Chapter 2 (Is It a Dream? Chapter 2 More Confusion)
8. The Feeling of Meh (The Feeling of Meh)
9. This is a Test (This is a Test)
10. Rebuilding Thunder (Rebuilding Thunder: Chapter 1)
11. Forget me not (Forget Me Not)
12. Is it a Dream? Chapter 4 (Is It a Dream? Chapter 4 Meeting the king)
13. When I need you, even just a second. (When I need you, even just a second.)
14. Review Day! (Review Day!)
15. Fire (Fire)
16. Friends (Friends)
17. Midsummer night's cool touch (Midsummer night's cool touch)
18. Winter's End (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104402#c393826)
19. Black Tears (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104366#c393466)
20. It's funny how sickness seeps into the body. (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104367#c393345)
21. Two Sparrows (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104359#c392965)
22. How Long (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104337#c392292)
23. Amelia Earhart (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104317#c392288)
24. The Mob Boss (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104281#c391627)
25. of flesh and blood (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104410#c393927)
26. Barber Shop Pleasantries (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104405)
27. Just in case you thought this world was a fair one. (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104407)
28. Sunsets (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104192)
29. The Seven Crows (http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=102264)
 


She puts away the journal carefully, staring at the empty pages. "Looks like quite a bit of work I have left before me.'' She whispered softly, then closed her eyes.
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Mmm I completely forgot.. anyway I've done 10 ever since I made that post all the way back in page 26.?

Spoiler! :
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104333#c392252 (why wn't that link work?)
Stalking- sometimes it's good... (ok this one when I started writing it it was in the green room, and as you can see from the time the person before me was writing at same time, posted it a few seconds ahead of me)
Rumored Friends
Scotch
Son of a Killer ch2
knots
Son of a Killer ch1
"Vicky...Not so Icky?" Part Two.
Hidden in a Lie Prologue
Jerry
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Just another update on the Honorable Contest Reviews and Entries:

Wanderlust -- needs 1 review
I want to be punished no more, Daddy. -- needs 3 reviews
Flares -- needs 2 reviews
All I See Is A World Torn By War -- needs 2 reviews
The Biting Game: Alice's Story. -- needs 2 reviews
The Fluke Kingdom -- needs 3 reviews
Foxtrot -- needs 2 reviews

Knights eligible for the MC3 badge: @Jonathan, @niteowl, @HomeschooledTeen, @fortis, @Hannah, @BlackNether12, @Rydia, @dragonfphoenix


Pieces that have already received the 3 promised reviews, but are still eligible to be reviewed if Knights want to become eligible for the Main Challenge Badge:

Spoiler! :
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=102916
A Cowardly Pandora
Calypso
Benjamin Bumblebee
Hope.
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It's a rough terrain out there, what with Knight Dragon flying about on foot and slaying every beast that dares to even hint at crossing his path, but even in the presence of such vicious, honest, and loyal violence, two Squires take up their honorable posts and complete the duties that were set before them. Ten reviews in the spirit of the Green Room, to protect the citizens of the town from danger and disappointment -- that's what they completed and what they offer now on bended knee in a castle undergoing repairs. Knight @Sapi takes a break with Knight @beckiw to stop hanging tapestries and witness the ceremony. Knight Omniyus (@Aquestioning) sits on a newly carpentered chair in an upper balcony and has a fine view of the dust coating the battle-worn Squires' hair.

"For your service, we grant you title and a place at the table," announces Knight Hannah to the hushed and crowded hall.

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Knight Malachi, Knight Blackwood
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I begin my job as a Knight. I slack for the first few days, but after a good meal mount my trusty steed, and set out to battle for a sword, lance, and ultimately . . . a Unicorn.

Spoiler! :
For a sword
11. ​Chapter one

12.The Beast

13.Endless: Part IV

14.Endless: Part V

15,http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=104438#c394297

For a shield!

16.The Assassin- Part 3

17.Twelve Years: Just One More

18.Paxton Chapter one

19.Kingdom Come

20.The Masked

For a sword!

21.Untitled Work 3

22.Detachment

23.Endless: Part VI

24.What Happened to the Time

25.Endless: Part VI

For a horse!

26.Poems 2

27.Paxton Chapter Two

28.The Princess's Feet

29.Endless: VII

30.castaway

31.I am

32.The Chronicles of Xaba: Part One

33.caesura

34.Fantastical Book 1: The Mirror (Prologue)

35.Chapter Two

For a suit of armor!

36.The Chronicles of Xaba: Part One (Take Two)

37.In Love Again

38.Math Class

39.When I need you, even just a second.

40.Just Like The World

41.Review Day!

42.Exhausted

43.Perfectly Content- College Essay

44.Paradise

45.Fire

Next Badge!

46.Hairball

47.Mysterious Ways (chapter 1)

48.The Pack - Chapter Two - Kaat

49.Living Weapons: Chapter One

50.Kira's Story, Chapter 1

51. The snowy Moor

52.Leprosy

53.Nothing Sweet

54.What day is it?

55.I am me


A coat of Arms! (It is a scroll with a green ribbon tied around it)


56.Tricks

57.Welcome To Hell

58.Those Sidelines Matter

59.Desperado

60.Princess.

61.Removing The Mask ~ Chapter One

62.A Night to Remember - Chapter 5

63.The Cat's Quest-Ch 1

64.Perfect: Chapter 1

65.Dumb Poetry

66.Adventures at Evening (experimentation with iambic pentameter)

67. Challenge Accepted.

68.Saved From the Fall

69.Every Prayer

70."Technology - in various ways"

71.Effects of Technology

72.A Brand Matters

73.Technology: What would be life without it?

74.The Man in the tower, Chapter 2 Contiued

75.Awakening

76.In Search for Ease

77.Pros and Cons Nowadays

78.Only In Fairy Tales

79.What is School for an Ordinary Student?

80.Mayay! Rewrite

81.Technology in Every Facets of Life

82.Days of Gold Gone By: Episode One.

83.Two Separate Lives

84.Two Separate Lives

85.Rebuilding Thunder Chapter 2

86.Proving at Present the Countless Use of Technology

87.The Need to Breathe

88.The Cycle

89.Prologue. "Beautiful Nightmare"

90.Kite

91.Invisible

92.The Artist.

93.Roaches

94.Scavenger

95.Part One - Eyes on the Walls

96.The Seasons

97.Lucky Pair

98.Fly

99.Ferrozine Woman

100.The Biting Game: Alice's Story.

For my chalice!

101.Losing Sanity

102.I want to be punished no more, Daddy.

103.I had warned you.

104.Sweatshops

105.Repaid

106.Capture

107.teenager

108.Lost in the Wind

109.King Of The Sky

110.Secret Walls: Prologue

111.I saved the world!

112.The footsteps

113.Hope- A Solicit Sight.

114.Penguin at the Bottom

115.Emerson Essay

116.strangers

117.What to Do?

118.Love is something, but

119.The Pack - Chapter 3 - Fawkes

120.Prologue - Together We Make The Elements (Working title)

121.Fantastical Book 1: The Mirror (Chapter One)

122.Overcrowding in the Hawks Nest

123.Adventures of the Pokemon Journalist - Chapter 1 Part 1

124.Lesser Being Prologue

125.Chapter 1: Encounter

126.A Stroll Amidst Seasons

127.What You've Done

128.Disjointed Entanglements

129.my story-baby dragons

130.Start to a story - Nature's Finest

131.My story.

132.When My Life Took A Sudden Turn.

133.Drips of Blood

134.Days of Gold Gone By: Ep.Three

135.No More

136.Fantastical Book 1: The Mirror (Chapter Two)

137.Basketball Heart

138.A Lost Cause - Ch 1

139.sometimes

140.Her

141."Abandoned" Part 1

142.My Lord, My Savior

143.Strengths of the U.S. Constitution & Government System

144.From Us Teens

145.Under the Influence

147.A Lost Cause - Ch 2

148.sometimes

149.Free At Last

150.Crucifix

For a chest!

151.My Lord, My Savior

152."Abandoned" Part 1

153.Her

154.Evacuation

155.Miracle Worker

156.The Hybrids (chapter 1)

157.Pressure

158.SlushySlapped

159.BLOOD

160.Undecided Title :)

161.Letting You In. (Jcsmooth)

162.Alone

163.Chemistry

164.The Violin

165.Tendencies

166.Count To Ten

167.Ennui (The Media Center)

168.How does giving up smoking affect lives?

169.Dear Skylar, I'm Coming Home

170.Shimmer II: Unicorn Genocide - Chapter 1

171.My Scar

172.The Unforgiven Destiny:Prolouge

173.Sing

174.When The Rain Falls - Chapter 03

175.To Fall or Rise: Chapter 3

176.edit:(1)- Faceless beyond Scrutiny

177.

178.

179.

180.

181.

182.


For the piece of Shrubbery.

1.Kingdom Come

A village
1.Endless Part II
2.Endless Part III
3.Endless: Part IV
4.Endless: Part V
5.Endless: Part VI
For the town
6.Endless: VII
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Mon Sep 23, 2013 12:38 am
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This time the great hall is quieter and emptier. Many Knights have rushed off to aid in the High Volume Alert emergency the town has declared -- they're being overrun by beasts, and it is the Knights' responsibility to keep them safe. So while few Knights are able to attend the ceremony, those that do are no less proud. Knight @Rydia stands by the doorway with mud still caking her face, ready to run back out into the fray as soon as the moment is over. Knights @Aley and Barefoot (@barefootrunner) sit side by side at the side of the room with Knight @skorlir, deftly sewing up torn and battered shirt sleeves; the weather outside is growing slowly colder.

In this quiet, intent Great Hall is where Knight Ariana (@ajruby12) bends on one knee to receive her title and swears the oath to fight forever with honor, loyalty, and knowledge in the name of the Knights of the Green Room.

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Mon Sep 23, 2013 12:48 am
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Just another update on the Honorable Contest Reviews and Entries:

Wanderlust -- needs 1 review
I want to be punished no more, Daddy. -- needs 2 reviews
Flares -- needs 2 reviews
All I See Is A World Torn By War -- needs 2 reviews
The Biting Game: Alice's Story. -- needs 2 reviews
The Fluke Kingdom -- needs 3 reviews
Foxtrot -- needs 2 reviews
Ferrozine Woman -- needs 3 reviews
A Week For the World: Day 1 :Part 1 -- needs 2 reviews

Knights eligible for the MC3 badge: @Jonathan, @niteowl, @HomeschooledTeen, @fortis, @Hannah, @BlackNether12, @Rydia, @dragonfphoenix


Pieces that have already received the 3 promised reviews, but are still eligible to be reviewed if Knights want to become eligible for the Main Challenge Badge:

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A Cowardly Pandora
Calypso
Benjamin Bumblebee
Hope.
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Also, loyal Knights, be sure to check out the most recent installment in our fictional history, as told by myself and Knight Omniyus (@Aquestioning) the Brave!

Rebuilding Thunder: Chapter 1

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Lady Ariana's heart leaps within her as she is given the title Knight! But she humbly bows her head and makes a ritual oath to serve and protect the good people of the kingdom. Then, she grasps her sword and strides out from the hall, her next quest in mind already. Ah, but to be the Silver Knight.. It was an honor great enough to cheer a king, yet harrowing enough to frighten the bravest of hearts.
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I reviewed Wanderlust
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It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien