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Tue Jun 11, 2013 4:23 pm
Jonathan says...



Yeah it did.
There seems to be nothing written here. :shock:
  





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Tue Jun 11, 2013 4:25 pm
Jonathan says...



Wait if it is like that then you can still review my works right?

Fantasy Land: The Storm-Light Shards.

Fantsy Land: The Book Of Storm-Light.
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 4:30 pm
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Of course I can still review your works, but that rule only applies specifically to the very first chapter of a novel, not just any one of them. Anyway, even if I review a chapter, it still counts toward my overall count, not just if I'm going for a piece of land.

xD But it all depends on my time. For example, I have to get to bed now, so if I have time and feel up to it, I'll try to stop by your chapters! 'Night!
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are you a green room knight yet?
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 4:45 pm
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But that first thing was just an idea it did not count as a chapter. <3
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 6:02 pm
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Jonathan says...



Boars head: Obtained.

Knights of the Green Room
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 7:07 pm
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alliyah says...



Good day to all ye Noble Knights and Squires, Squire Alliyah is reporting here to start her quest in obtaining Knighthood!


On thee Thirteenth day of June in the year 2013, Squire Alliyah kneeled and was knighted in front of her fellow Knights. She promises to battle Green Room reviews, as long as there is life in her body, and writers trembling as their writing stands reviewless. :)


And now I claim a sword! :)


And now I claim a shield to better protect myself!

21.http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=103169
22. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=103373

Log continued at Alliyah's Log
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 8:25 pm
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Sins says...



Yo, mah homedawgs, Skinz here to padizzle mah reviewizzle... Or in more suitable terms, I would like to begin the challenge of obtaining my knighthood. (I was meant to post here yesterday but I fell asleep and forgot to, oops)

1. Amusement
2. successful failure
3. Closets Scene #1
4. Character Teaser Intro- Isaac Eagle
5. When All That's Dead
6. Black and White [2]
7. Black and White [3]
8. Sun and Shadow: Dakota's story chapter-1 beginning
9. The Two Faced World
10. Lost Ones Chapter one (Conner and Margret)

11. The Days We Forget to Love- *Chapter Three*
12. Collapse: Chapter One
13. Loss and Gain pt. 1
14. Twisted Demeanor
15. White Veil
16. Collapse: Chapter Two
17. Collapse: Chapter 3
18. Collapse: Chapter 4
19. Waiting for a Train (The Acolytes pt. 1)
20. Freedom

21. When All of Us Have Fallen--Chapter One
22. My 21 Heartbeats
23. Dramatic Monologue (can't think of a title!)
24. Gemsworld Quest: Prologue
25. Risk ch 6
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Tue Jun 11, 2013 9:55 pm
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StoneHeart says...



Kill-List update. A quest.

26. Palurin en' Maranwe Part Two
27. Black and White [1] (This review seemed so useless . . .)
28.A Hero's Welcome - Chapter 3
29.Home
30.The story of man
31.The Gardener
32.Dreamkeeper
33.The Iron Maiden (This one was done for Wordy, so I win myself a fellow-in-arms badge as well).
34.World peace
35.Pain
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Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:17 pm
Jonathan says...



Common Hannah you are not doing your duty. :(
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Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:27 pm
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Omnom says...



Calm down jordin, she has a job that commands a lot of her time ;)
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Fri Jun 14, 2013 1:57 am
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PenguinAttack says...



As the Green Room crawls with beasts that prey on innocence and light, KotGR feel their efforts flagging. It is now that we welcome that which comes so blessedly from the ranks of squires - new, hard fought knights.These fresh-faced squires come before the kingdom of YWS and kneels to receive their title;

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Knight Alliyah

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Knight Skins

jordin - we need an account of the battle (a narrative) for you to get the boar. Black - don't forget to update that original post. Badges being updated now. :)
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Fri Jun 14, 2013 2:26 am
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Fortieth Knight Fortis! Onward to DESTINY!

She fiercely fought her first few battles, armed with nothing but a keyboard and fire in her blood. Valiantly, she tackled all ten of her foes and moved from squire to knight.

~The Beginning of a New Chapter~

Fortis. The Fortieth Knight. She humbly bowed to Knight Hannah as she received her first KotGR badge, and a feast in her honor. She looked bravely ahead to all the adventures that awaited her. "First," she determined, "I must arm myself appropriately!"

For a bright shiny new sword!

She finished off the final battle and smiled a smile of one who loves the scent of revisions. "More!" She shouted, brandishing her new sword (which she had dubbed "Staraliantaron"), "I need more!"

For a shield!
Spoiler! :

Fortis noticed her fighting skills improving. Her reviews were getting more helpful and she felt some pride in finishing off the last reviews to get her shield, which she dubbed "Soultriaton." She looked ahead to more improvement and something to cover her head.

For a helmet!

Through a couple quick battles, fortis the fortieth Gained a magic helm. She dubbed this helmet "Rochetiset." When worn, it made the middle segments of all her fingers invisible! Pretty amazing huh? Now if only she could reach the poems at the further end of the kingdom...

Of course of course! I need a horse!
26. Bathtub, Chicken, Daddy
27. Simple Hello
28. Thrown Words
29. Chasing The Goal
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Fri Jun 14, 2013 2:50 am
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PenguinAttack says...



:D Squire fortis, we're happy to have you! Keep track of your reviews in the one post, once you hit 10, then you're a Knight!

Don't forget that you have to be the first or second review on the piece and we have a whole list of amazing badges you can get, and how to get them, on page 1 of this thread!

I look forward to seeing you knighted!
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Fri Jun 14, 2013 1:26 pm
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Jonathan says...



I was coming out of the forest waking my way into the ruins of green room, and saw a mighty beast the largest I had ever seen before I feared it and ran back but then I thought how UN knightly it is to run from something, I plucked up my courage turned and walked back out steadily I saw the huge monster was eating a horse this made me angry I lowered my lance and charged full speed at the monster, my spear sunk into its front right leg and made it below and fall to the dirt where it stayed for a moment, I lept off of my steed onto the giant monsters back and stuck my sword into its neck then it grabbed me and smashed me into the ground almost breaking my back, I swung my sword and cut of a piece of it nose it bellowed again and smashed me into the ground, but my armor saved me then I stuck my sword into it's huge hand it let me go, I ran under it and cut its tummy open but it was still alive it grabbed me pulled me up to it mouth and and tried to eat me but just as I went in I stuck my sword into the top of its mouth instantly killing it, I climbed out of its mouth got onto my steed and road back to my village.
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Fri Jun 14, 2013 7:48 pm
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StoneHeart says...



I have won my horse (named Pain), and a fellow-in-arms badge.

(The fellow-in-arms: The Gardener - For Rydia).

The other ten are posted above.

(Note: These reviews are updates mainly, from a while ago!)
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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