Young Writers Society

I'm not sure why I'm submitting this but i had this dream last night and its so random. keep in mind i wrote this at three in the morning and don't judge too harshly.

As I ran down the hall I realized that the floor was a cloud. I bounced around a corner towards a class room and saw the sky surrounding me on all sides. I sank into the deep ocean when I walked into room 210 and a colorful fish swam by. I made my way towards the desk that lay on the top of a mountain. Winds whipped my face as I entered the dessert. I got to the desk. I woke up.

Was this really worth your time posting?
This would have been more suitable in a blog.
It's hardly displayed as a narrative and is rather pointless.

I found no point in reading it.

ya i know i couldnt get it out of my head and so i wrote it

considering most of the stories on this site couldn't be classified as true "short fiction" anyway, i don't find anything wrong with the length here. you told us your dream, and i think it's a cool dream. go on and express yourself, point or no point.

Nice dream i have odd ones like that somtimes.

thanks guys

Is this a part of a story that your going to write? If not i think you posted it in the wrong place.
T

*Moved to The Lounge*