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Fri Feb 01, 2008 12:19 am
Wolf says...



Jared, you are amazing.

*self-conscious*

You really, really don't have to critique this. It's just that if you want more pieces to review...

Breaking Storm

:}

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Fri Feb 01, 2008 12:27 am
Lady Sydney says...



Thank you sooo much for posting this! I was getting desperate. >.< lol I have a poem for you. It's the first in my "Seven Deadly Sins" series.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic25161.html Not sure how to make the linky thing into my own words. Sorry. :? But here 'tis!

Enjoy!
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Fri Feb 01, 2008 1:49 am
PerforatedxHearts says...



It's called "The Kids Want CALAMITY!"

Linky:

topic25344.html
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Thu Feb 07, 2008 9:01 pm
Lady Sydney says...



Hello again. ^_^ I have another piece for you, if you need to add more to your count. It's the second poem in the Seven Deadly Sins series; it's Vanity.

Read and rip as you wish! ^_^ Thanks in advance.

~*Sydney*~

Link: post300879.html?highlight=#300879
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Fri Feb 08, 2008 12:25 am
Emerson says...



I want more thoughts. XD


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Fri Feb 08, 2008 3:50 pm
Jasmine Hart says...



I'd love one on this, if it's not too much trouble, but don't worry if you don't have the time.
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Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:24 pm
onceuponatim3xo says...



Omg, you're soooo awesome!

If you could these that'd be really really nice! :D

(Spelton Academy Ch. 1)
topic24068.html

(Spelton Academy Ch. 2)
topic24134.html


Thank you sooo much!!
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Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:30 pm
deleted6 says...



Great, I wouldn't mind one or two.

I would like a critque for Chasing Rainbows Chapter 1 Revised
topic25776.html

And

The Voyager: From Death to Life
topic25398.html#

I'll appreiacte it. Thanks a million.
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Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:31 pm
BigBadBear says...



K, thanks everyone.

I will be doing these tonight and if I don't finish I'll do it tomorrow.

Thanks a bazillion for posting these links!

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Sun Feb 10, 2008 6:26 pm
Aedomir says...



Hey! Are you still doing these? If so, it would be great if you could crit The Immortals #8. It follows on from the one I put in the advanced critics forum. Its not very long but its my personal favourite. No deaths, just Aedomir lying under the midnight stars lol :-D

You're great! I must catch up on StoweAway!

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Sun Feb 10, 2008 7:51 pm
Julia J says...



Hey! I'd really appreciate it if you read my prologue to my currently untitled story.

topic25635.html

Thank you (:

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Thu Feb 14, 2008 9:59 pm
StellaThomas says...



If you like, I'd adore you forever if you gave me a crit on this:

topic25922.html -it's the first part of a fairytale retelling (the version of the Little Mermaid where she tries to kill the prince and princess then kills herself at the end). But honestly, don't feel obliged!
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