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Sun Dec 02, 2007 6:57 pm
Fangala the Flying Feline says...



Anyone up for a crit exchange? I'll review any one thing in your portfolio if you review any one thing in mine.

Come on...how can you pass up an offer like this?
"Hey look! A black shooting star!"

"That's no star...that's Fangala!"
  





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Sun Dec 02, 2007 6:59 pm
Emerson says...



I'm going to move this to the lounge... Doesn't really fit here. Eh. Ish.
β€œIt's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
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Sun Dec 02, 2007 10:37 pm
Gadi. says...



Okay, let's EXCHANGE!
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it is so far away
  





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Sun Dec 02, 2007 10:42 pm
Icaruss says...



I posted the exact same idea in the Writing Activities section and nobody answered it. You guys suck.
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Mon Dec 03, 2007 6:00 am
BigBadBear says...



I wanna do it!!! I'll go and critique something right now!!!


BBB
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.
  





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Tue Dec 04, 2007 2:32 am
Fangala the Flying Feline says...



Aw, I'm sorry, Icaruss! If I had seen your post, I would definitely have responded to it.
"Hey look! A black shooting star!"

"That's no star...that's Fangala!"
  





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Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:39 pm
Icaruss says...



It's alright. I'll play, though.

Wanna have a go?
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Tue Dec 11, 2007 5:10 am
Lancrist says...



If you're looking for another critique I'd be happy to swap.
"Death will not make my end."
  





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Wed Dec 19, 2007 5:19 pm
Fangala the Flying Feline says...



Whoa, I haven't checked this topic in forever! Sorry, guys. I'll get right on those reviews.
"Hey look! A black shooting star!"

"That's no star...that's Fangala!"
  








I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights