Hey all! Mmkay, sooo...I have a story called Chasing the White Dragon which is receiving few comments and I've asked once before and it still hasn't received any since I asked soo...here I am, begging. I honestly can't grow as a writer if no one is willing to critique- and if there is a reason as to why Chasing the White Dragon has been viewed more than 400 times but only received 4 comments or so <:cry: yes, I'm trying for some sympathy here. Hey, might work with someone! > I'd love to know to see how I can make it better. Here's the link to it, and I'd definitely appreciate it if you checked it out:
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And I definitely do intend on returning any critiques I receive, so pm me a link to whatever you need commented on and I'll do my best...and if I forget, then just pm me again, flood my inbox with a million messages I don't care
But anyways, thanks so much!
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