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I need people to review my poem



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Sat Nov 21, 2015 9:21 pm
SinisterPotatoe says...



I need people to help review my poem, it's called In the fields and is a historical fiction. Here is the link :)

In The Fields
  





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Sat Nov 21, 2015 10:37 pm
Willard says...



no

"Words say little to the mind compared to space thundering with images and crammed with sounds."

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