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What was YOUR favorite NaPo this year?



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Thu Apr 30, 2015 2:00 pm
LadySpark says...



NaPo's a day from being over, so I'm curious. Out of all the NaPo's you posted this month, which ones were your favorites? Why?
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Thu Apr 30, 2015 2:08 pm
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TimmyJake says...



It'll be a difficult choice for me, as I wrote all of one poem. >>

Out of the poems you wrote, which one was your fave, Sparkles?
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Thu Apr 30, 2015 2:50 pm
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I have several, actually!

#1
#7
#9
#11
#12
#15
#17
#21
and #22

I can't really decide on my favorite, though. Probably either #7 or #9

I tried to keep similar things going throughout, and continue parts I liked from one poem into the next one in a different way. #10, for example, continues the idea of never pulling the trigger even when you have a gun in your hand. The echoes of my favorite lines in each poem is probably my favorite part about this NaPo, because it allowed me to experiment with all kinds of different ideas.
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Thu Apr 30, 2015 3:17 pm
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Pretzelstick says...



I like how the title says YOUR because sometimes we get so caught up in other people's opinion that this blind-sights us from our personal favorite.Here is mine:

Ink to Paper

Spoiler! :
Like sunlight burning at midnight,
Your lantern lights the path
Ink to paper

In days of wandering,
Pointing which way I shall go
Ink to paper.

Words locked up in a cell,
Novels trapped inside my mind
Waiting to be released free on
Ink to paper.

“Who is this?” you ask.
It’s my writing muse,
That’s ink to paper for you!
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once
~George R. Martin

Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw

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Thu Apr 30, 2015 8:50 pm
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BluesClues says...



Obviously school caught up with me, so I didn't reach 30, but of the, what, ten poems I posted, I have two that I like:

Love Notes
Cross-Curricular

The second one especially. It's been a weird month for poetry-writing for me, like the way I went about it was just really different from what I normally do. (And more time-consuming, but school is the entire reason I fell dreadfully behind.)

Hoping to get one more out before NaPo ends here in about seven hours, but we shall see. I have plenty of pieces for it, but I'm not sure I know how they all fit together.
  





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Thu Apr 30, 2015 8:57 pm
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Rook says...



I think poem no. 52 is my favorite.
Cantos from K____
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Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

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Lumi says...



The one I felt confident enough to publish.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
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Fri May 01, 2015 1:29 am
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ScarlettFire says...



I think #10. "if not for you" is probably my favourite out of all the ones I wrote this year.
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Hattable says...



My favorite part...?
Probably, not participating in it. :p
Seriously though, you people seemed so stressed! Good job making it through, though.
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Mea says...



I think my favorite was #7, Comfort.

And @JKHatt, it is a little stressful, but a lot of fun too. :D
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Fri May 01, 2015 2:51 am
niteowl says...



Overall, I don't think my NaPo this year was as good as 2013 or 2014. I think I took more risks and tried different things back then, whereas this time I mostly just spit out random fragments.

My absolute favorite is #4, but I'm also partial to #3 (and the others about my Yia-Yia), #6 (my first attempt at Spanish poetry!), #8 (the one about blue...just realized there were two #8s). I'm also proud of the no-adjectives challenge, but I feel like it wouldn't make sense to anyone else.

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Rosendorn says...



My favourite is one I didn't post on the actual thread, but might make it up eventually. I actually kinda like all of them and this is some of my favourite poetry I've ever written.
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My hand is here:

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Seeing you curled into your own darkness,

Wanting to be loved and comforted,

Needing someone to be there for your time in need,

Take it, my hand is here.

Crying your heart out to the Heaven's above,

Praying for the one you want to be there,

Begging for another chance,

Take it, my hand is here.

It will be alright, my friend,

You are never alone in this dark world of ours,

Come to me and cry with me,

Take it, my hand is here.

Let me ease your pain away,

Let me take the suffering in your heart,

Let me see your hand,

Take it, my hand is here.

I will always be here, my friend.

Because my hand is here.
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Sun May 03, 2015 4:20 am
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I think that my favorites are Wandering Feet, Twisted Memories, Internal Wounds, Dungeon, Whelve, Butterflies, and Adamantine.

I think out of all of those though, Twisted Memories was the most creative and original. (other than Wandering Feet)
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Sun May 03, 2015 8:55 am
TinkerTwaggy says...



I totally like all two poems I wrote for this (*is slightly ashamed*), but hey! At least I did something... Right? I do feel like I should publish them to get some feedback though. 'Twas my first time writing poems after all.

My favorite of the two, though... Hmm... I really like both of them, but I'd say that it's "The Winged Pawn's Arrow".
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Upon this facet of the world, above the great sky,
A white expanse could be explored, for those ready to fly so high.
It was the mark of a world unheeded,
For no mere Earth Dweller could reach it .
It was a world of clouds, winds and mountain peaks,
In which only the bravest of birds would find what it seeks.
The world of Avalias, or so it was called,
Was home to unique creatures, airborne.
The Aveos, or so they were named,
Were the supreme rulers, if they remained
United against their numerous foes.
Wild beasts, furious winds and thunderous skies,
All were enemies, for those without keen eyes,
And trusty comrades to accompany.
But a new threat, courtesy of a mighty Earth Dweller,
Was coming, adding itself to the struggles yonder.
It was a castle in the sky, floating in obsidian heaven,
Spawning mechanical birds to catch the wings that had been given
To the flying masters of Avalias, who were now reduced to Pawns
In the eyes of their artificial hunters.
Many Aveos lost their beloved wings
And fell to the land of the Earth Dwellers.
Doomed to despair, the rebellious Pawns decided to shape an Arrow
That would transform their rising sorrow
Into the very weapon that would strike the castle in the sky
And bring back their right to fly.
Panzaro was the name offered to the new leader
Fated to become the fearsome slayer
That would finally guide the Aveos close by
To freedom.
"Is there a limit to how much living I can live with my life? How will I know if I've gone too far?
And why did I spend my life savings on sunglasses for a whale?
I shall find the answers... to these questions."
  








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