I apologize as this is going to be very vague but I can't reveal too much of novel as I'm hoping for it to become published.
Which of the following feels the smoothest, most logical way
1. Character A goes with Character B, Character B allows him to remember all, Character A then goes on to discuss his quest with Character C
2. Character A goes into world where his quest is sit, Character C allows him to remember all
3. Can you think of an alternative? Probably not, but...
Thanks.
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