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Dream Deep wrote:Try reversing it - the classic misunderstanding. ^_~
Character A gets the impression/is told by an unreliable source that Character B did something less than commendable. Ergo, they grow apart - Character A no longer wants to spend time with Character B. At least this'll buy you some time, from chapter 3 to the end.
So at the conclusion, when all is resolved, their relationship is more striking.
Perhaps a thought.
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