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Does what you have heard make you wnat to know more about the story?

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Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:41 am
impossibly_unforgettable says...



i promise i have a story to post but i am trying to give my characters a little bit more background and humanism. The dad in this story lives in scottland and is a law partner. He is a workaholic but i need something that he is interested outside of work and something that him and hid newfound daughter can bond over. The daughter fences and plays volleyball and guitar, and also loves horse riding (she used to live on a Wild Mustang Ranch in Nevada) please help!
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Mon Dec 04, 2006 1:43 am
Poor Imp says...



Not precisely fiction then, is it? ^_~

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Mon Dec 04, 2006 2:15 am
Snoink says...



Maybe they have nothing in common and they get along only by some conflict that happens to both of them! :D
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Mon Dec 04, 2006 4:51 am
Via says...



I'd have to agree with Snoink on that.

Or maybe he had a band in highschool and played the guitar??
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Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:21 am
impossibly_unforgettable says...



Wow I have to say that is a pretty amazing idea, THANK YOU! I just might have to use that. But what would one call his band? hmmm......

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Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:19 pm
Mickiemoo says...



it could be something really cheesy, so that he doesnt like to think about it, or talk about it, and its only because his daughter plays the guitar that he is remembering it all!
  





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Mon Dec 11, 2006 9:46 pm
gold_tangerine says...



The name of the band is The Locusts.
Yeah, puff up a balloon
Have it get you sky-high
So when it pops and you fall
You can't feel yourself die
  








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