[url][user][/user][/url] So I'm writing a book where right now the protagonist has a concussion and cannot focus very well, so when the other character asks them a question their speech is slurred and sluggish, so I kinda need help trying to write them speaking as if they're about to fall unconscious or as if they've been drugged. Any suggestions?
Slurred speech can be formed with sh taking the s position, so that it seems realistic. Maybe add a Ellipsis to give a stop. Also add some in story detail.
Ex. She felt her eyes drag as she tried to stand. The room around her was shaking and she let out a mumble, "Where am I?.. I though I was s-safe."
I hope I helped.
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