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The Freeman



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Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:21 am
TheFreeman says...



Howdy, i am actually two people in a sense, my girlfriend and i, i do most of the posting. We are working together writing a Sci-Fi Post Apocalyptic Story, which for now is called "The Nameless Book", we can't really come up with a true name yet. I myself am a big Sci-Fi and Historical Fiction (20th century, WWI, WWII, Korea, Vietnam ect.....), but, i my gain some enemies saying this, but over all i'm kinda an anti-fantasy and anime person, while on the contrary me GF is so you can like her :D . and i'm really looking for comments and advise on our stories! if you could stop by and say something i would be grateful! Thanks! topic38255.html
  





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Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:40 am
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Dude, I love Half-Life.

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Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:41 am
Juniper says...



Hello there! Welcome aboard!


That sounds awesome! I love reading sci-fi, but I can never write it myself. It's of the few genres I'd rather not ruin for people. If you need help deciding on a name for "The nameless book", I'm sure there are plenty of people around here who are willing to help.
Don't worry; we have the anti-anime people and the anime-fanatics here, so you'll fit in perfectly.

I will definitely check out your story, and give you a full review on it.

Also, we have a 2:1 policy here; you must review at least two of someone else's work before you post your own work. I see you have posted it already, so please review someone else's work before posting anymore and try to make up for the 2:1 for your piece :).

To the both of you, god luck on your writing adventures! If you need anything, feel free to PM me!

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Thu Nov 20, 2008 3:08 am
TheFreeman says...



Well I'm not a reader at all I've barely read any books, not even any sci-fi, my gf's doing most of the writing (shes a big reader), I'm helping keep her motivated, on track an have ideas, along with plot , i don't know what to look for to read, i don't know what to say, I don't really care, I'm also to afraid of saying something stupid or wrong, or upsetting someone.
  





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Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:09 pm
Demeter says...



Hello, Freeman!

It's cool that you write together :) I'm not very much into Sci-Fi, but I'm sure that a lot of people here are.

Well, June already told you about the review ratio thingie, so I won't be going there now. You should also check out all the rules and whatnot.

Plus that this is a writers' site, so remember to always use proper grammar, punctuation, capitalization of the word "I" etcetera. Just to mention... ;)

Anyway, have fun and PM me if you have any questions!


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Thu Nov 20, 2008 2:07 pm
Kaylyn says...



Welcmoe aboard!
Check out the Rules, please.
I love history. My papa was in the Vietnam War. So I know quite a bit in that area.
I also don't like anime, but love fantasy fiction.
I can't say that I have read much scifi, well a little. I love the Uglies.
Anyway, if you have any questions, ask away. PM me if you need anything.
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Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:39 pm
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TheFreeman wrote:Howdy, i am actually two people in a sense, my girlfriend and i, i do most of the posting. We are working together writing a Sci-Fi Post Apocalyptic Story, which for now is called "The Nameless Book", we can't really come up with a true name yet. I myself am a big Sci-Fi and Historical Fiction (20th century, WWI, WWII, Korea, Vietnam ect.....), but, i my gain some enemies saying this, but over all i'm kinda an anti-fantasy and anime person, while on the contrary me GF is so you can like her :D . and i'm really looking for comments and advise on our stories! if you could stop by and say something i would be grateful! Thanks! topic38255.html


Hi Freeman! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you're gonna love it here.
Historical Fiction? Awesome. I love stories set in WWI and WWII, I'm fascinated by that period of history. Don't worry; I'm not a big fan of fantasy of anime either and over here, we all know eachother's comfort zones and respect that.
I'll be sure to drop by your story and read it; the title sounds promising.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy it on this website.
If you ever need anything, feel free to PM me; but I'm sure you already know that.

I'll be seeing you. *waves.*

Sarah
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