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Wed Sep 10, 2008 11:24 am
Awaken-the-Dark says...



Hey, I'm Jasmine and I'm 14 years old. :D

I was introduced to this site by my friend, she showed it to me as we both enjoy to writing and i thought, may as well join, looks like a cool place to show some of my stuff.

I have previously posted stories on fan fiction but i have found that its not exactly the best place to get criticism on your writing abilities as all the reviews revolve around what happens in the story, not how it's told.

I have a little obsession with all things vampires...my family is half convinced that I'm one, they say i have a very morbid way of looking at things, haha. So of course i love Twilight...didn't like Breaking Dawn so much...but still thought it was okay.

Okay what else...hmm...i really love to read and write, i have about 50 thousand books in my room, haha.

I have a few story idea's that I'm working on but i sometimes get so lost in thought with what is going to happen that i don't get around to actually writing it out.

Well i think that's about it for now, byes!

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Wed Sep 10, 2008 12:03 pm
Demeter says...



Hey Jasmine! *waves back*

I really like your name. I've always thought Jasmine as my favourite Disney princess. :D I'm Demeter (or Dem, Meter or anything you like).

Is your friend a member here, too? Who's she? :D

If you think you have problems with getting writing started, there are, for example, many good usergroups to help you. Check "The Novelists", "Elements of Plot", and "Character Development" for start. You'll find the "Groups" section in the upper side of the page.

Also, before doing anything else, check the rules (in Help and Support section). They'll give you the main idea about how the site works. :)

And even though this is a writers' site, the members should review some work, too. It's actually quite fun to help others! :) You'll get also points by reviewing (as well as stars) and you can attend chat after 25 reviews, yay! Before you post your own work, please do at least 2 reviews.

I hope I didn't sound too priest-y, haha :D

Do you have any favourite authors, by the way?

Oh, you're from Australia, too! I'd really love to go there some time...

Well, have fun on the site and PM me if you have any questions or just want to talk! :)


Demeter xxx
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 12:44 pm
Night Mistress says...



Hey, Jasmine!

I like vampires too. You should read my story, Poison Love. You might like it.

If you need anything at all, including friendship, don't hesitate to ask me.

I look forward to seeing your work around.
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Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:33 pm
Merry_Haven says...



Awaken-the-Dark-
Hey. Hi. Ho there, Jasmine! Welcome to the YWS family. I hope from us you'll have a warm welcoming. :D
I remember when I was 14. *thinks deeply*
Any hu, Who's your friend?
Yeah, it's a cool place but very addicting. Once you post something, everyone would want to see more of your a-m-a-z-i-n-g work!
I've heard of fan fiction, my younger sister is in to it. :roll:
You love vampires? Man, I love them too! I have to ask...do you think male vampires are really sexy? My dad thinks I have a unhealthy obsession with vampires. Which, I don't think I do.
I have read Twilight {are you gonna see the movie?} but haven't read Breaking Dawn. I'm still stuck at New Moon.
Yeah, I'm totally with you there. In my room, there's tons of books scattered everywhere. Sometimes its hard to get around.
Okay random question time. Do you prefer sunsets or sunrises? Red, pink, yellow or white roses? Um, and oh! Rock/Alternative, hip hop/rap, or country music? That's all I can think of for now. If I have any others I'll pm you or something else.
Well, I've said to much. Off I go...for now.
-Merry
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Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:47 am
casey_kent says...



Hey there Jasmine!

Welcome to YWS!

Tis an AWESOME site so you will surely enjoy!

First, please read the rules and the FAQ. This will help you out a lot. We have a rule which indicates that you have to make 2 reviews first before you post anything. Please do not break this rule and as well as the other rules.

If you have any further concerns, feel free to PM me!

Cool, another Twilight fan. So what do you enjoy writing?

Enjoy and have an AWESOME time!

See ya around!

~Casey the AWESOME
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~Hi I'm Brianna! Welcome to YWS.
I'll be very happy to review any of your work! I'm here to help!
Also If you have any questions don't be afraid to PM me!
It's very easy to make friends here. You can review someones work or help them out. There's also a chat room. It's has a schedule though.
Pm when you get the chance! :D 8) :P
-Brianna~
  





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Thu Sep 11, 2008 7:36 pm
gamechanger10 says...



Psh. Who doesn't like Twilight?


umm...no one.

Anyhoo. I love the name Jasmine. I have a main character in a book that I've written named Jasmine.

Well, I'm Jocelyn. :D

If you have any questions or just want to talk, I'm on the site A LOT!
haha. Yeah. Just PM me whenever.


Hope you totally LOVE it here!
Can't wait to see your stuff around!


-Jocelyn.
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Thu Sep 11, 2008 8:16 pm
alwaysawriter says...



Hi Jasmine. My name's alwayswriter but you can call me whatever.

YWS is a great place to be and, to keep it that way, please look at the Rules and Guides.

I'm an Instructor and a YWS mentor so if you ever need me to review anything or have a question, I'll be glad to answer it.

PM me for anything at all. :)

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Thu Sep 11, 2008 8:48 pm
Runelord says...



Hi there *gathers loads of garlic* *waves*.

Awaken the dark nice name so is Jasmine.

I'm not so much of a vampire love more of an Elf/Drow guy, but neva mind that ^_^.

I am a huge fan of world of warcraft do u kno it or play it?

I didnt really read what other people have written (1st time for everything) so I dunno if any1 told you about the 2:1 reveiw rule, anyway if u want anything i have the ghost of ashenvale (plz read them at least i have't had a reveiw for ages) and the girl with the wild ook in her eye (my only poem)

one last thing PM me for anything (even someone to yell at ^^)
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Fri Sep 12, 2008 6:39 pm
jasmine12 says...



Ahhh this is crazy. My name is Jasmine too!!!!!
And I too love all things vampire-related.
Gah I didn't like breaking dawn as much as the rest of the series either.

Welcome to the site by the way!!!
If you need any help you you'd just like to chat pm me!!

--Jasmine
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Mon Sep 15, 2008 4:06 pm
*singerofthenight* says...



Hey! Welcome to YWS!

I'm jennie

I try to greet every new person there is but seeing how there s so many new people that tneds to be a problem.

well anyways, you have offically been greeted.

~jen
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