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Sat Nov 17, 2018 11:14 am
varada6467 says...



Hello everyone.
I am Varada, from India (Rajasthan).
I am in grade 9
I am studying international cirriculum.
My English is good enough

I have posted 2 of my stories on this site.
Those are chapters from a novel that I have started to write.

Chapter 1 Jigsaw Jumble
Chapter 2 Shreds of Evidence

PLEASE REVIEW IT FOR ME.
I also request you all to please comment on how I can improve what I have written so that it creates a good novel. :D :D :) :pirate3: :pirate3: :smt001 :smt002
  





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Sat Nov 17, 2018 3:13 pm
FireSpyGirl says...



Hi there!!! Welcome to YWS! Let me know if there is anything I can do for you, and I will try to help.
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Sat Dec 01, 2018 4:44 am
Iggy says...



Hey there Varada and welcome to YWS!
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