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Sat Oct 31, 2015 1:21 am
HarryLittleGirl says...



can anyone plzzzz help me write an arguementative essay on" it is necessary for the government to provide breakfast and lunch to the children"............so plzzzzz can anyone help me.......here are my points for necessary
Poor Family/ Needy
Healthy Meal :P :P :P :P
Save Money
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plzzzzzzz help meeeee with my workk....thxxx :D :D :D :) :) 8) 8)
  





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Sat Oct 31, 2015 1:43 am
niteowl says...



Hi there Harry and welcome to YWS!

If you really want help with your essay, I suggest doing your research, writing a draft, and then publishing it in the Publishing Center. That way you can get real reviews based on your specific points, but you're still doing the main work (which should be the case for a school assignment).

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Welcome to YWS!

Niteowl is right on all counts! If you put together the basic format of your essay with your points, arguments, and references, then you're sure to get decent feedback in the Publishing Center! And if you want specific folks to review it, you can always ask either in person, or in the Will Review For Food forum.

I really hope you enjoy your time here! In no time at all, it'll become your internet home. Trust me. ;)

p.s. I fixed the thread title to remove the all-caps--just a guideline we follow on most threads. :]
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Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll learn to love it here, we all do!
  





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Sun Nov 15, 2015 12:59 am
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Heya and welcome to YWS! I hope that you have found the help with your essay that you need. If you have any further questions, please don't hesistate to PM me with them, I have done lot of essays and can probably help you if needed.

Hope that you really enjoy yourself here!
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