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Sun Jul 26, 2015 2:42 am
Lorelie says...



Hi YWSers,

So I finally posted my work, changed avatar, posted to my review day team and got two pretty reviews. Now I'm going to peacefully... *dies*

-Lorelie

PS I couldn't resist to not make my first review before review day, so 500 points yay :smt029
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Mon Jul 27, 2015 12:55 pm
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Pretzelstick says...



Heya Lorelie, thanks for your contribution for the Review Day team. The theme with avatars, was really fun and I think that most people enjoyed it. Out of curiosity,I was wondering: which team were you on?

Also, if you ever need any help or guidance please feel free to PM me, and I will try my best to answer you. (btw, what bird is on your avvie?). Here is my all time favorite video on how to critique and so forth:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgFE2W9qICo&feature=youtu.be
A reader lives a thousand lives before he dies. The man who never reads only lives once
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Life isn't about finding yourself; it's about recreating yourself. ~George B. Shaw

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Tue Jul 28, 2015 3:34 am
Lorelie says...



Heya Pretzelsing,

I was on Earth Kingdom. *is proud of their 2 reviews trophy* It wasn't really my element, but we almost won (before water rooted us to the ground). I wonder if Water won, it definitely washed away all our dreams *ah, the uncertainty* Well, it must be... somewhere :?:

Thank you so much for the support (not much for now but... we'll see :smt003) It's a Crested Lark (not very Earthy but who cares :arrow: :smt015

Umm, baddawweiiii... where are the BBCode buttons for reviewing? I'm using my PM editor for the moment (for preview and so forth) :smt004 aand it worrrks!

Oh, and nice video, by the way! I almost grabbed some popcorn (if I had some) but it turned out to be really interesting, especially the way it can apply both to giving and taking reviews :) But I wonder if it's really that simple (write, hear, edit). I'm really awful at writing (and lazy) so I need a lot of preparation first (and procrastination) and I hate to edit (why destroy such a beautiful thing :smt010 ), BUT I love to review (maybe too much).

Somehow I'll regret this tomorrow, but can you please make one of your reviews for me??

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0 Prologue between the click of a light and the start of a dream

Oh and I just discovered I'd be an Earth Kingdom spy (working for... the Water Kingdom :smt032 )

Rydia wrote:Either choose for yourself or take this quiz to let us know which nation you support!


Oo-er it's getting late... Time to go :smt006
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Tue Jul 28, 2015 3:38 am
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Vervain says...



Hello and welcome!

For your information, I was the Water Tribe captain and I am very offended that you would spy for us oh who am I kidding, welcome to the family :P

As for using BBCode in reviews, there's not an advanced box for that, but using your PM editor definitely works! There's also The Big Book of YWS Codes, which has a list of the BBCode that's supported on the site, in case you ever want to do something but don't know how~

You'll fit in great on the site :P If you have any big questions, feel free to make a post in the Questions and Answers subforum or PM them to someone in light green, dark green, or red; we're moderators and administrators, and we're here to make your stay on YWS an awesome one~
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Wed Jul 29, 2015 2:16 pm
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Welcome to YWS! :)
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these tornadoes are for you


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Thu Jul 30, 2015 3:30 am
Lorelie says...



Hey @Arkhaion and @LadySpark,

Thank you for passing by. I was wondering if any of you could review grammar for my first work. I've got an intriguing first review... This is for you too, @Pretzelsing

I was really thrown off that my heart was Water and that I'd better keep Earth away. Damn those pesky tests :D I can't complain about my Team though (oh can I?)

Thanks for the links, I've been trying those codes a lot... really (too tired to use them now though)

Okay, follow me for nuts...
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Thu Jul 30, 2015 7:40 pm
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Welcome to the YWS. ^^
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Sun Aug 09, 2015 2:42 pm
ThereseCricket says...



Welcome to YWS!

Congrats on doing such a good job with your first review day. :D That's awesome.
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In Doubt Liberty,
In all things Charity.
  





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Tue Aug 11, 2015 4:18 am
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My extremely belated welcome to you, welcome to YWS!
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Tue Aug 11, 2015 9:53 am
Lightsong says...



Welcome Lorelie. I can tell you're an enthusiastic reviewer. e.e
"Writing, though, belongs first to the writer, and then to the reader, to the world.

The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:37 am
fukase says...



Hey! Hey!

Welcome!

*just walking on by....
I love Koku.
He is damn cute and should be the main character
and not some lazy old man that supposedly genius but a sucker in his own life.
Koku is Koku.
Koku is CUTE.
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Thu Aug 13, 2015 4:53 am
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Lorelie says...



Yay so many replies from yewis with so many... *checks that no one's reading this* nice signatures!!!

@ThereseCricket+@Lightsong Stop it, you're embarrasing me ^^

@Flite I guess it's never too late to welcome somebody (and/or to bump a thread e.e )

@Iggy Thank you! (This also goes to everyone else tagged, I don't need to spam you with tags (tags tags evrywheere!)

So, meet my second work. I'm so inviting you to dig in (all of you, except @Holofernes):

1 Too early might as well be worse than too late

I will leave you in with my next evil plan...

I'm planning on creating a thread (second thread whoo!) asking people things about how an Ambivert INFP would behave (about love/school/. I was thinking of posting some useful links (short tests and accurate tests AND type descriptions) in pairs (you're never alone) but I'm having a hard time picking the right way to start. All I'm asking for is help, I don't want to start it here on this thread *is watching you*

Spoiler! :
It's for my novel, so why notttt?

@NicolMemo You did come here. Thanks!

I'll shut up now (not really).

PS I'm also thinking of creating a club for yewis who get lazy after their second star (14 to go... for me)
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