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Tue Jan 13, 2015 10:39 pm
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BlackFish says...



Hey. I'm not exactly new here, just a third account, but this one I'm taking seriously. It's a great site so I'm looking forward to delving into it more.

I've published a work in the short story section and I'd like some feedback if that's okay. It's my first one here so admittedly I'm kind of biting my fingernails at this point. Just a suggestion :)

Thanks!

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Tue Jan 13, 2015 10:45 pm
Iggy says...



A third account? Hmm.. I wonder if we've met before?? WHO ARE YOU? :mrgreen:

Hello (again?), Black Fish! Welcome to YWS. :)

Hope you like it here.
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Wed Jan 14, 2015 3:25 am
ThereseCricket says...



Ohh, third account, eh? :P

Welcome to the site. :D Let me know if you need a review or have a question!
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Wed Jan 14, 2015 4:59 am
BlackFish says...



Thanks for the greetings!

Uploaded a story on the Short Story section. Any feedback at all would be greatly appreciated. At your convenience, of course.

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Mon Jan 19, 2015 3:22 pm
r4p17 says...



Hey, welcome!
One writer with one imagination makes thousands of new worlds and stories." ~ Anonymous author
  





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Fri Feb 13, 2015 9:21 pm
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Lumi says...



Welcome (back) to YWS! I hope it sticks this time. ;D

I'll go digging for your short story sometime soon! I'm sure by account #3 it's fantastic.
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