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These are all really cute and I think the reflection of the sun really adds to the vintage look of the photos. I didn't really like the last two as much as the others though :\. Not entirely sure why. I do think that the first picture would be better if you didn't write anything on it, and let the viewer interpret the meaning behind it themselves, but that's up to you. I personally don't like putting quotes in my pics because then it takes out the ability for everyone to interpret it in their own way according to their own feelings and experiences.
Good job with the sunlight, you did a really good job there :). I'm extremely impressed! Keep it up and keep your art close to your heart so that it doesn't fade away <3.
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Hey (: great pics. I didn't really get the first two, and I thought there could be a little less glare, but I absolutely love the last one. (I'm not really good at reviewing photography, but I thought I could at least comment.)

Out of curiosity, why were you taking pictures of your camera? I didn't really see those ones as art, per se... they possibly could be, but like I said, a little less glare. (nice camera though).
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Thanks guys!:) And Wewinwelose, thanks! I personally actually am quite opposite..:) I love writing on photos, but only some of them...lol. but everyone is different...:) And Peanut....hmm...Idk..i just thought i'd give it a try...:) and I liked how it turned out so, yaah...:) lol. But thank you!!:)
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Oh, hi there Impossible. :D

Nice photos you've got here. I have to say, I think the best one is the last one. Because the other ones look a bit weird because of the light. Not saying that is bad, but the last one certainly looks more professional, I can definitely imagine it in a magazine, or in a newspaper, or something. ^_^ Though, they are all lovely. Great job!

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Hello Impossible!

I must say, these are pretty fancy pictures. To be frank, I love fancy! <3 No joke. ;)
Anyway, these were adorably cute and by the way, WELCOME TO YWS! :D
I hope you're enjoying, love. xD

Okay, back to topic. Now... For the opinions and how to improve. (Y)

Picture 1: I absolutely loved this picture. Only thing is that the effects should have been more less. Taking a picture naturally is the best thing. Anyway, I loved this one and Ooo La La. <3 That hair! *.* Is it your's? Is, I ISH LOVE WITH IT! And obviously, the camera is AAAA-SOMMEEE _V_ ! Good Job. And Oh! The quote was good too.

Picture 2 & 3: I don't know if you edited or not, but whatever it is, it looks like it hasn't been edited. ;) Because this was my favorite. The way the camera is kept and the sun glaring from the back. WON-DER-FUL! XD Me like! (Y) But the picture got cut a little in between, or did you want to take it like that?

Picture 4: This was quite too simple, I guess? I didn't like it much but whatever. :/
At least its taken naturally and that's a + point! :D

Picture 5: I am a fan of motorcycles so, I loved this picture. That style of taking and I actually kind of laughed over the fact that the speed was at "0". Of course, I wouldn't want you to take a picture while riding because that's too dangerous :S, but I was just capturing that scene in mind? :P I'm so weird. o.o

Anyway, these were cool pictures and you have a scope to be a really good photographer. ^.^
I'm happy I saw this one. (Y)

Overall: Very good. I can give this one a 8 and half/10. XD

Keep Taking Photographs! Yeah! :3

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Picture 1: to be frank this picture is over exposed and there is too much light. Details are not so clear. But over all effect is cool! I like final result.

Picture 2: There is glare of light in he right bottom part of picture which makes it uninteresting and some is in the case of third picture too.

Picture 3: I like this picture most because everything is good in his photograph. Focused tail light and sallow depth of field of background creates a story in the picture.

Picture 4: This is great photograph but you experiment with new things in bike like parts of engine, chain anything new.. would do.. Overall 7 out of 10 for this photograph.

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Thanks guys! :) I will definitely take this all to heart! And Choco, yes! that is most definitely my hair! :) lol.
Gawravmehta, I have other pictures more natural less edited and of the bike...I just didn't know if i should post them or not...:) But I shall.
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Impossible -

I thought I'd drop in and do a quick review as I watched the second day of 25 Days of Christmas on ABC Family! Anyways, it's nice to meet you and all that, now on to the actual review. I get sidetracked too easily.

Photo One: First of all, your hair looks super amazing. The color is so unique and the picture makes me super, super jealous. Now that that's stated and done, this looks like an amateur photo, much akin to the ones that a lot of my friends will use as profile pictures on Facebook. First of all, it annoys me (warning: nitpicks to follow!) that I can see the specks on the glass of the window/whatever. It just makes it seem sloppier to me, as if I'm thinking, "why couldn't she wipe it off?" I'm picky, I know. Secondly, this is so over-processed that it is disorienting. First of all, it's too contrasted in the fact that the skin is blaring white, like a hotspot, as is the whole half of the photo. It isn't pretty to look at. And my last point . . . the font, hun, is just ugly. It's one of those automated ones and it's gross and too overdone with all the editing. You can check out dafont.com for some amazing free fonts that don't take much time to download and look more professional and clean.

Photo Two & Three: I do not quite understand the angle on this, nor do I understand the "motive," I suppose, for the photo itself. When you take a photo, always think of your reason for it, even if it's just to show your grandmother that supercute outfit you bought in New York. Anyways, the angle bothers me, as it is sort of disorienting. I don't like the glare from the flash and this is once again over-edited. It seems you've contrasted it too much once again, as you did in the first photo. A common theme in your photos is your camera, which is cool and hot and all that, I suppose, if you're trying to be no more than an amateur with a hot camera. Think of a new perspective if you really want to photograph cameras, because the lack of originality is bothersome.

Photo Four: Alright, you're improving a little here. Definite props from me to you for the fact that, whoa, it's not your camera I'm looking at again! Except, a red light on a bike isn't exactly interesting or enthralling, especially in the way you presented it. There is nothing "popping" about this. I do commend you, however, on the use of DoF, great job with that!

Photo Five: Alright. This is most likely my favorite of the bunch, as it's unique and interesting and has all that stuff I've been mentioning this whole boring review. The angle is great, I love it. This one is just superb - I have nothing to nitpick. Bravo.

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