hey, Astral's muscle focusing power gave me a cool idea. Maybe our characters could all have abilities that were hidden in their code or DNA or something. Carlos's fire breath could have just been a power that had developed preamturely, and I was thinking Kirsten could Have enhanced reflexes and agility, and Leon could have the power to instantly travel from one place to another. (Not really teleporting, more like magical molecular scrambling. or just "Shadow Leaping" if that's eseir to remember.)
so should I write next? I could do a bit where Scar dissapears. maybe I should wait until Astral gets himself out of the whole "Getting chucked off a cliff thing."
Plus the kidnapping can't just happen. It needs to be during a climatic point as some moment because if you do it at an anticlimactic moment it becomes the main heroes main priority. Put it on top of a climatic moment and it has more loss, suprise, and drama
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
Also the whole kidnapping incident won't be an easy solve I assume? It will probably go on for a while considering I intend to make it agonizing for both Astral and Scarlette. So she can't get saved after one post. A mini mission might have to happen during that mission to get her back. That way I have time to get tortured, open my power, and get to know Astral.
"Sometimes it is the people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine" - The Imitation Game
