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My post is up! Just want to let you know a few things:

Astral's leaving the island for the time being, letting his creation(s) occupy the heroes. In the meantime, he'll just be screwing around and doing his own thing. Maybe he'll run into Leon!
But the main thing is, if @TheForgottenKing wants to introduce their character, the time would be about now. Catching wind of a superhuman could give him a lead on his little sister, and successfully integrate the new character.

Also, feel free to go nuts with Astral's creations. Robot armies, robot ninjas, or anything you think would be fun to fight.

Lastly, Astral uses a weird power in this post, but I promise you it ties into his super-intelligence. I'll let you know how it works and how to beat it later.

I feel like I'm hijacking the plot a bit, so if anyone has anything they'd like to say, please, don't hesitate!
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My idea was mainly just build up his past and why he's looking for than begin his separate journey searching for her, than eventually find her.
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Chaser, the only thing I am not okay with is the Queen Scarlet thing! She's mine! Meany! May the best Carly win!
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So my first post will get him on the trail. Where is the lab Astral left? He'll start piecing things together.

Also, @TheFantasy14, have my character page up and just awaiting approval
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One plot element I would like to put out there. Once we all do come together, I'm thinking Kirsten to be the rebel of the group. She doesn't like or trust Astral, and believes she would make a better leader, causing tension between Astral and Kirsten. The infighting in the group causing damage in it's own turn as the rift between them grows.
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@TheForgottenKing I didn't have a particular location in mind. Go ahead and make it up.

@TheFantasy14 Sounds good. But the whole team's still a long way off from coming together yet.
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Post is up! :)
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So, you're going to the lab? ...I assume you know that I blew it up?
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Matthew doesn't know this yet. He'll get there find out it went kablooe and look for more clues. He just knows a general place to start looking.
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Gosh I'm so flipping excited!!! Btw with who Scarlette picks depends on my choice muwahahaha! So make it good haha ;)

Plus I love that Scarlette will eventually find her brother! That makes my heart happy!
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Who's next to write?
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I'm gonna wait for Tybalt/Kirsten/Carlos to post before I go.
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I can do it. I'll post it in about an hour.
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Kay. Astral's creation is a giant Lion. (Y'know King of the jungle. He's always calling himself a king so...) Also, before Leon makes his big entrance, I would like to point out that The whole "Kirsten's my little sister" Thing isn't planned to come in until there's a bit of character development with the two. Maybe she finds the files Matt has, Maybe he tells her, at any rate it doesn't come in until there's been a bit of conflict between them.




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posted. Carly's turn. or Tybalt. whichever works.



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