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Hi! Very interesting plot presented here. I welcome you to expand! There is so much more we need to know! Like, the fisherman’s backstory. I mean, he is like very ...

Hi! What I liked about this story was it reminded me of R.L. Stone’s Goosebumps series of books. I devoured all of them. And loved them to bits! Now, as ...

DAY 11 THE BEAUTY OF THE STORM AND THE RAIN the beauty of the storms and the rain. sometimes, it isn't misery or pain. it is the beauty of being ...

Me, energetic, not scared. Emma, kind, vibrant appearance. Cole, energetic, rad appearance. Brody, scared, sensitive. Vile, tired, worn out Ava, mean, annoying. I’m not sure why this part is necessa

Its another song, kind of connected to my other one called "Circus Rose". Enjoy.

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Rose and her party go to fight evil, ...

Hi names 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! First Impression: well i guess from the title it's a poem that's really supposed to much us feel something ...

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world), Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!! Anyway let's get right to it, There was once a woman ...

Jarid meets his friend's dragons and tries to work things out with Smolder. But is this wounded dragon willing to forgive?

The children who died are ghosts. They wander what used to be the school. One of them ate fruit which turned him from human to dragon. Now claws replaced his ...

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Katherine, a 200-year-old Grim Reaper, receives an assignment where she must usher her aged friend to the afterlife, yet Katherine holds a secret.

My second review. I'm trying to write one a day so that can familiarize myself with other people's work as well as see what things I may have to change ...

Letting his hands fall away from Alan's back, Lyall tucked them away in his sweater pockets, watchful gaze trained on his friend as he idly adjusted his collar. There was ...

Alright, your entry both has a lot of good, and some bad. First, the good: 1. The allusions flow naturally. 2. You characterize Adam and James well. I'm left with ...

Brenna Lawrence Knock knock knock The sharp raps on the door echoed throughout the dark room, causing Brenna to wake up with a groan. She hated mornings with a passion, ...