Young Writers Society

@AkiraEliza whilst there's no rule against posting here, this is technically Midnight's hello thread xD You're welcome to post your own or to post here: Anyway, welcome back!

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the mutated S’more? Top Graham Cracker - William comes across Roman and displays more of ...

Yes, they're all so good!! I'm really loving the vibes

Hi names 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! First Impression: from the title I am guessing that we will be in a dream that someone is having ...

DAY 5 GREEDINESS DOESN'T MAKE YOU RICH I am important as you are, so we can stop this war. why do you have to be so mean? don't read the ...

im petty on main

It's really good! I like the metaphors that you use to describe the pain the girl is going through. Some sentences felt like they were running sentences. So maybe break ...

It's fine lol!

Sadie nodded, satisfied. "They are pretty phish-y. Chaos goblin. But does good work." @Shady

To be honest, if your goal was to rhyme like the last line, you did a bad job this time but it's fine it's not like it's a crime the ...

Hello, hello! Finally getting around to my first review of this novel! I've really enjoyed reading so far. Now, let's get into it, shall we? We're thrown head-first into action ...

Jane Dawn in collaboration with @Ley, @Spearmint, @ThePatchworkPilgrims Jane found her time with Jocelyn incrediably fascinating. Humans were all quite different, with varying opinions regarding thing

Hello fellow writer! This was such a touching and beautiful story. I absolutely loved the similes you used to describe things. The wind traveled like a snake... Yes, the descriptions ...

James blinked slow and hard, muttering something unintelligible before he turned his attention to the star in his hands, looked back up at Mel, then hesitantly sat down in the ...

Hi names 22Midnight hope your doing well, let's get into it! Merci meaning: Thank you in French. Merci you stood by my side, Merci you are with me every day ...

"NO!!!" Eden screamed...