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What if the world was incapable of love?Follow the story of a girl whose world falls apart as she learns everything she thought was real is a lie.

Hi, I’m Toast and I’m here to review chapter 1 of your story: Hysteria! I won’t be criticizing or praising any grammar or spelling points as long as it’s not ...

Hey!!! My name is KaeRae, just wanted to give a few suggestions when I'm reading. It had big dark green letters standing tall on a one-story building. It read “dollar ...

DAY 9 BLUE HAIR, BLUE EYES blue hair, blue eyes, colors and hues like the skies. I love the way you breathe and the gap between your teeth. well, who ...

Hey! My name is KaeRae, just thought I would give you a few suggestions while I was reading. The creature then slashed Emma, which led to her eye being popped ...

Never trust a stranger who is good looking.....

Hey!! My name is KaeRae! I loved the first part of this, just thought I would give some corrections while I'm reading... When I slid the door open to my ...

Hey!! Loved this part of the story but just wanted to give a few corrections, Thinking about it a little more made it all the more sense This part is ...

"I was born into this world, made different from others. Yet I hate making myself live the basic life of everyone else's."

Time for a Black Cat Review!! MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very ...

Time for a Black Cat Review!! MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very ...

Can someone be so mesmerizing yet so dangerous? Cliff hangers should be illegal shouldn't they (;

No worries, @yosh! Best of luck with your exams!!

Hey! Me again :D There are a few misspelled words or errors I wanted to point out really quickly such as But no matter, hoping out of bed, Willow drew ...

Hey AraWolf! I think Rose added some good commentary, but I wanted to jump on and add that when you wrote daughter of Hazel Reap and Jorge Reap and sister ...

Hello, Ley here to leave a review on this awesome work of yours! I will be using my own review method today: Ley's Potato Chips Version! :D I'm trying out ...