Young Writers Society

Hello Again, My Friend! I'm continuing my review of this great story today, again using my Familiar method! Let's dive in, shall we? Heh heh heh... What The Black Eyes ...

Hey! My name is Kaerae, I just stopped by to give a few suggestions while I was reading. First of all, I don't know the back story because I haven't ...

Hey Toast! Just wanted to stop by and give my opinion while I was reading. First of all, I absolutely love the concept that you have based this nightmare off ...

Hello Again, My Friend! A bit late, but fully back in the review game lol. It's me, Raven, and I'd like to review the next chapter in this great story ...

i'll try to do mine today

Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Rose fights enslavers, defends her crew from ridicule, ...

Hi it's 22Midnight again hope your doing well, let's get into it! First Impression: so I'm guessing where still looking at things from Zeke's point of view that cool, really ...

What if the world was incapable of love?Follow the story of a girl whose world falls apart as she learns everything she thought was real is a lie.

Hi, I’m Toast and I’m here to review chapter 1 of your story: Hysteria! I won’t be criticizing or praising any grammar or spelling points as long as it’s not ...

Hey!!! My name is KaeRae, just wanted to give a few suggestions when I'm reading. It had big dark green letters standing tall on a one-story building. It read “dollar ...

DAY 9 BLUE HAIR, BLUE EYES blue hair, blue eyes, colors and hues like the skies. I love the way you breathe and the gap between your teeth. well, who ...

Hey! My name is KaeRae, just thought I would give you a few suggestions while I was reading. The creature then slashed Emma, which led to her eye being popped ...

Never trust a stranger who is good looking.....

Hey!! My name is KaeRae! I loved the first part of this, just thought I would give some corrections while I'm reading... When I slid the door open to my ...

Hey!! Loved this part of the story but just wanted to give a few corrections, Thinking about it a little more made it all the more sense This part is ...

"I was born into this world, made different from others. Yet I hate making myself live the basic life of everyone else's."