wakegirl

Glad I could help :)

Thanks so much, this is really helpful. Don't worry about the date, you're advice is still really good and it might be good that I haven't looked at for a ...

Thanks Sonii, This is really helpful, especially your point about us not knowing much about Maddie :). Thanks again, Wake x

Thanks Noelle, This is really helpful! :) Wake x

Hi Shino, Thanks so much! Yeah there is more to the story. This is just the opening part of chapter one of a book I'm working on. If you'd like ...

Hey Em, Thanks for the tip about paved. This piece was just a writing exercise we did in a session so it was more of a snippet from what could ...

Thanks Cadi, I see what you're getting at about the abruptness of the into of the daughter, I will probably go back to that. The idea of the stargazing makes ...

I'm really sorry guys but for some reason the line breaks and grammar aren't showing up so if you could just imagine the line breaks are where the capitol letters ...

Don't stop writing it! It may not be a finished work but it will definitely give you lots of ideas and keep your imagination strong.

Hey Emily, That's alright. I admit I haven't read any of the other Anna/Ryan stories so I was probably just missing that side of his character, the sentence 'crappy immune ...

thanks so much this is really helpful I will definitely review that line as I see what you mean :)

thanks that was really helpful!

Thanks so much Cadi! This is really helpful and I completely understand what you're saying especially with the dialogue. I'm going to go back and re-write some parts now keeping ...

is that a good thing???

Ahhhhhhhh I love this it's so sweet and lyrical :)