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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Accidental Magic 2-the second-to last unicorn-chapter 3

    So Ellie has an evil twin? Interesting…wonder what the evil twin is going to do. Take Ellie’s unicorn? If the twin gets to it first, will the unicorn become evil? ...

    10 hours ago

  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical
    Re: Spring Into Summer, and Summer to Fall

    I’m going to have to watch “The Witch” one day, because I love the vibes in this poem. It seems like the narrator is giving themselves over to the tempting ...

    Mar 27, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Aytra Islands Intro

    WHOA… That was epic! The Dalis and the Anors have been in this great war and now there’s a person who could possibly be from BOTH sides? Maybe they’ll be ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Supernatural
    Re: Wakefield, Wyoming. Chapter 5

    I’m listening to Dinah Shore songs right now to get the vibe of the story and I like it! Now, onto the chapter. It’s sad that even her brother slammed ...

    Mar 25, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Accidental Magic 2: The Second To Last Unicorn-Chapter 2

    I think I’ll read “The Unicorn Quest” books, because unicorns are, as Ellie said, UNICORNS. Onto the chapter. I liked that Ellie climbed the top of the mountain no matter ...

    Mar 24, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy
    Re: Ever After-Season 1, Episode 1

    So why is Mallory friends with the villains? Seems a bit…SUSPICIOUS. I guess I’ll have to find out in the next episode. Snow and Charles must have already switched bodies ...

    Mar 23, 2023

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Blood and Water

    My heart just about burst at the end of the story. The beginning started out harsh but the ending…so heartwarming and sentimental. I agree with Aunt Ludivine that the true ...

    Mar 22, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General
    Re: devotio

    I enjoyed this story. It was tragic, but I liked reading it. I think that this is talking about wanting something despite the circumstance. In the beginning, the boy wanted ...

    Mar 21, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Romantic
    Re: House of Blood

    This sounds like it’s going to be a good story. I particularly appreciate Jake’s nicknames for the villains, they are quite clever and creative. I think that the Faceless Man ...

    Mar 20, 2023

  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural
    Re: The Tooth Fairy

    When Wanda says that the Tooth Fairy is not going to “take another child” from her, does that mean that…Wanda had children before Timothy? Children who also lost their teeth? ...

    Mar 19, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Re: MaryAnna (S1, E2)

    No one suspects anything for now. Mary is safe for now. I don’t know what’s going on with Martha. Probably something bad. I have a feeling that Mary might get ...

    Mar 18, 2023

  • Poor Arnold. All he wanted was to burn bright, but he melted away. At least he had Ms.Cocoa with him. Both marshmallow and hot chocolate will be remembered. In fact, ...

    Mar 17, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor
    Re: MaryAnna (S1, E1)

    So that necklace must have been important enough for Gloria and Mary to fight for it. Richard seems to care enough about wanting Mary and Alex to have a good ...

    Mar 16, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other
    Re: The Spooky Squad Chapter 2: Giggling Fit

    This chapter is great! If Grace/Giggles were a real toy, I’d totally want her. As for the clowns…oh my god…YOU FOUND MY LONG LOST FAMILY/j! And…that devil horned guy Grace ...

    Mar 15, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
    Re: The Vamp: Transylvania Interlude (Part One)

    Oh man…poor Sirena. She trusted György with her heart and soul and he took advantage of her. This origin was beautifully written and very haunting. Sirena loved György, but György ...

    Mar 14, 2023

I have lived through much, and now I think I have found what is needed for happiness. A quiet secluded life in the country, with the possibility of being useful to people to whom it is easy to do good... then rest, nature, books, music, love for one's neighbor - such is my idea of happiness.
— Leo Tolstoy