Young Writers Society

William is going to Germany? Exciting! I wonder who this person that will bring romance to William’s life will be. He’s lucky that he got the job, now he has ...

I have a feeling that Sylvia’s second attempt at killing herself and Jake isn’t going to work. Something is keeping them trapped in a loop. Or maybe it’s someone… I ...

I did not expect that ending. I wonder now if that really happened. Maybe it was just a dream…or when Jake “wakes up”, he actually goes into the afterlife. What ...

It’s horrible to think that there are people like the men driving the kids away in real life. One wonders what goes on in the children’s minds…and in this story, ...

I love the imagery. It’s very descriptive and fun. It gets you in the mood of the poem. The poem itself is cryptic enough to be a riddle, but clear ...

I liked this story. Despite it all, Lisanne preserved. She has a really big heart, because I wouldn’t have kept quiet about what Katherine did. Lisanne’s Mom is the best! ...

Kaori lived a good life, at least. She cared so much about the beauty of life and all around her. At least Kaori got to see the sakuras before she ...

I sense that there is something off about Caitlin’s life. She was homeschooled by a staff, which implies that her parents have a lot of money. Her parents hosted parties ...

It’s been a while since I’ve watched the Harry Potter movies and read the books. This poem makes me want to get back into the Harry Potter fandom. You’ve described ...

Kara let go of her past! She’s free. :> It will take time to be completely free, but for the most part, she’s free! Kara helped her younger self, the ...

I like how the other two Karas are representations of Kara’s thoughts. (At least, I think they are). The younger Kara is mocking Kara for her fears. The older Kara ...

This is a dark story for such a ridiculous phrase. I like it! I wonder if deep down, Queen Loireth wanted her son to die because she didn’t like his ...

Oh no…Keith is in trouble. On one hand, he could tell them that he and Molly are from Earth. Maybe they’ll be annoyed, but they might help because he took ...

Keith likes himself! Yayyy! I’m so happy that he’s accepting his clownliness, because it is AWESOME. Of course Molly was the only one who wasn’t scared of the wvyern. Classic ...

That was absolutely horrifying. I liked it! I didn’t expect that ending, either. This is definitely really spooky… I’ll try to interpret the riddle to the best of my ability: ...