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Re: The sun sets, but it's a new day
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it! :)
Oct 17, 2012 -
Re: father's mother
Hey CharityDawn! I think this is really nicely written. I get frustrated with short stories because I feel like I'm missing something but that's just me haha. It's really nice ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: Thank you, Sun...
I love this. Seriously. I don't think sun is supposed to be capitalized? I can't think of what else to say haha. It's really nice.
Sep 9, 2012 -
Re: My Target Love
Thanks for your like whoever you are :)
May 12, 2012 -
Re: Little Thing Called Love
Aww I love it!
Jan 14, 2012 -
Re: Licking Dew
I really like this! You're very poetic! Beautiful poem!
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: .
aw o my gosh that's so sweet! Have you shown this to her? I think most of us girls are suckers for poetry! I just love this it's really cute.
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Again, this is beautiful. Is it about the same person? I have absolutely nothing for you to change. Your poem is amazing.
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: See life is beautiful?
That's really, really nice. The only thing is maybe.... "And see THE life in her eyes"??? It's really beautiful though. :)
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Are you serious?
haha ok just so everyone knows I didn't purposefully just like my own poem just so you know. I didn't know what I was doing haha :) If you don't ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Green, Green Eyes
Wow. That's a great poem. You're really talented. Keep writing! :)
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: In The Storm
That's a really great poem. I liked how you used an example of where you opened it to. :)
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Friendship Reunion prt.1 *edited*
Overall it's pretty good it's a good story and I'm pretty sure everyone already corrected the mistakes I saw :)
Nov 20, 2010