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Re: Where Did I Go Wrong?
Hey! I like this :) I just saw a few things you could fix: "Why am I the blame for this?" I think you meant "Why am I to blame ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: How I feel about my Life.
Hey sweetheart. I totally understand the need to get things off your shoulders. Everyone has done bad things. It may seem worse to you because you're catholic but God will ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: i really did love you too
Hey vampyIrishgirl, I'm so sorry. This isn't because I brought it up is it? Your poem is really good. It makes me feel really awful. It's really beautiful. I'm so ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: I will love you
This is beautiful. You don't like poetry??? Anyway I saw a few grammar mistakes which were probably accidents. For instance you said go instead of got. But it's beautiful, and ...
Nov 28, 2012 -
Re: Dancing in the rain.
This is a nice idea but... Mk... 1. It needs to be in poetry form if it's a poem! This: To swing along with my gentleman the strong and cold ...
Nov 26, 2012 -
Re: to grow old
Hey! This is good, it needs a little work grammar wise, but the idea especially is good. This: Not one single sound will befall your lips. Should be: Not one ...
Nov 26, 2012 -
Re: A promise to myself
I agree with Renn, it needs to be in poetry form if it's a poem! It is pretty though. You just kinda need to figure out what you wanna do ...
Nov 26, 2012 -
Re: Solitaire
Hey! This is very, very short. I think there's a good idea here but I don't know... It's written well, I don't see any kind of errors. I kinda just ...
Nov 26, 2012 -
Re: Living is Dieing
Hey! This is nice, thought provoking. I like your name by the way, "writingmyheartout," that's cool. Anyway your poems good, the format drives me nuts so fix it ASAP ;) ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Previous Crush
Hey! I like this, it's cute and I totally get the love at first sight feeling. It is, as they said, short but sweet :) in the last line I ...
Nov 25, 2012 -
Re: Love is such a difficult thing
I'm very glad I read the comments first because right away I was like, "welp first of all it doesn't look right," haha. Next thought: This is nice, simple. Young ...
Nov 19, 2012 -
Re: Crossroads (Children shouldn't play here)
This is good. It's sad, it makes me feel bad for you :/ But here's the little things I saw: Whose little hand held your even smaller It should be: ...
Nov 19, 2012 -
Re: As the Ashes Blow
This is nice, I'd like to actually hear it sung :) The only things I saw were: You tell you: Please just let it go Let the ashes blow. I ...
Nov 19, 2012 -
Re: I know i could
Hey! This is nice! I do agree with what Max said, it does need some editing, but I like it. I like the idea of it especially, this world needs ...
Oct 22, 2012 -
Re: Change
Hey Ela, this is a nice poem, I like it. Your writing is really beautiful.
Oct 18, 2012