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  • Hey thanks so much for the review. I'll definitely take that into consideration! :D


  • BluesClues
    Jan 27, 2011

    Thanks for the review! :) I'm glad you liked it. And glad I finally got a couple reviews on it lol ^_^


    tommyknocker Yeah, well it looked like a lonely bread stick (one) in the comments.
    Jan 28, 2011


    BluesClues Haha, good imagery :) I usually go review the ones that don't have any comments, because I know it sucks when you post something and it doesn't get any... I mean, who hasn't been through that, right?
    Jan 28, 2011

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  • LilySoulMahon
    Jan 27, 2011

    Thanks for the review :)
    Glad you liked it and yes, I know its a overused piece but I thought I'd have a go at writing something lighter as alot of my work is quite dark :)


  • xiodinex
    Jan 26, 2011

    thanks for the review (:
    i see you also like Stephen King too :D
    which makes everything better.


    tommyknocker Who Doesn't like Steve?
    Jan 26, 2011


  • KasidieClyde
    Jan 19, 2011

    Thank you for your review(:
    It was highly appreciated.
    And will be taken into consideration!
    Thanks again
    Kasidie Clyde<3


  • DiannePan
    Jan 17, 2011

    Hello there,

    Thank you for the review. It was very appreciated.


    tommyknocker Not a problem.
    Jan 19, 2011


  • BluesClues
    Jan 14, 2011

    Thanks for the review :) I will work on that - yes, like you said, it received only the work it did because of the prompt. Also, the main character is so strange partly because of the prompt. I mean, I was reading the prompt, and I was like, who would just open the door of a strange car? So I decided to run with it, even though everyone else in class either peered through a window or used an omniscient third-person P.O.V.

    It's without question the strangest thing I've ever written, but I had a blast writing it. :)


    tommyknocker We all write, and think strange things.
    Jan 19, 2011


  • TheWalkinDude
    Dec 30, 2010

    Hehe, nice name, dude. I'm guessing you've read "The Tommyknockers", huh?


    tommyknocker Mate, I've read all of S.K's books.
    Dec 30, 2010



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