thunder_dude7 has been a member of the Young Writers Society since Oct 5 2007. They have made 1745 posts and 56 reviews. Please take the time to welcome them to YWS!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
