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momonster
Sep 11, 2020

happy birthday!
Mageheart
Sep 11, 2020

Happy birthday! 🎉
demib
Feb 21, 2012

Thanks for the comment on my poem "The Last Lullaby"!

sunxkissedxme noproblem(: it was really good.
Feb 26, 2012
GawravMehta
Dec 5, 2011
sunxkissedxme

Hey, I've posted further chapters of much hyped 'Fakebook-Beyonf Facebook!'. If you feel like giving me review then I'd really appreciate because you're one of the prominent members of YWS. But, don't forget to read.

Introduction: topic91045.html
Fakebook Chapter 1: topic91064.html
Fakebook Chapter 2: topic91106.html
Fakebook Chapter 3: topic91159.html
Fakebook Chapter 4: topic91166.html
Fakebook Chapter 5: topic91201.html
Hope you enjoy reading! *Fingers crossed.*

sunxkissedxme Thanks I'll take a look at it as soon as I can
Dec 18, 2011
Karzkin
Sep 28, 2011

Sure thing. I'm more of a poetry bod, but I'll give it a crack. Why did you ask me in particular?

sunxkissedxme Not really sure, I just like the way you reveiw(:
Oct 1, 2011

Karzkin Ok, that's solid reasoning What did you think of my review?
Oct 2, 2011

sunxkissedxme I really appriciate it thanks so much for pointing out my mechanics and such, that's usually my weakest point in both my poetry and story writing. Thanks for reveiwing it even thoguh your usualy the poetry guy
Oct 2, 2011

Karzkin Good. I'm glad I was helpful. There weren't many major changes to be made, just the little things. But you know what they say, doing the little things well turns a good piece into a great piece. One puzzling thing though; you've justified it right, not left like I suggested It looks a bit funny like that don't you think?
Oct 3, 2011

sunxkissedxme Exactly. and yes, I justified it right, it looks much better. Thanks so much
Oct 4, 2011

sunxkissedxme Do you think you're going to follow the continuation of the story? Of course you don't have to, I'm just wondering. Your reveiw really helped.
Oct 4, 2011

sunxkissedxme And of course(sorry about the many many comments) I'm always putting new poetry on, so feel free to take a look at that if you feel so inclined.
Oct 4, 2011

Karzkin My pleasure. Happy to help. Yes, perhaps I will follow the story. I might not review every installment, but if I decide I have anything pertinent to say I might put my two-cents in Yes, I've read some of your poems. I don't like to review old stuff, but when I'm a little less busy I'll go over your latest one.
Oct 4, 2011

sunxkissedxme Haha I know what you mean about both things. thanks
Oct 4, 2011

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xDudettex
Sep 11, 2011
sunxkissedxme

Happy birthday!

sunxkissedxme thanks!(: officially 15!! whoop! XD
Sep 12, 2011
Toto25
Aug 5, 2011

Thanks for the review!

sunxkissedxme anytime
Aug 7, 2011
xDudettex
Aug 1, 2011

Haha, thank you! I love MCR, and Gerard is pretty hot too

sunxkissedxme haha
Aug 7, 2011
LadyPurple
Jul 12, 2011

<3 the avvie \m/

sunxkissedxme thanks!
Jul 13, 2011

LadyPurple You're welcome:)
Jul 13, 2011
PandorasChild
Jul 9, 2011

Awesome avatar

sunxkissedxme thanks, best band ever! haha
Jul 9, 2011
Kittengirl2
Jun 12, 2011

Hey, thanks for the review!

sunxkissedxme anytime, pm if you want me to check out anything else!
Jun 13, 2011
MUCHO
Jun 10, 2011

Thank you...is there something of yours that you would like me to review?

sunxkissedxme ummm, anything you find in my profile that you find interesting I guess! Nothing iinparticular right now, i'll PM you when I post something though
Jun 12, 2011
GryphonFledgling
Jun 8, 2011

Just wanted to let you know... your avvie is win. *loff*

sunxkissedxme haha thanks, yours too! lol
Jun 8, 2011
ChibiGiraffe
Jun 8, 2011

Mwahahaha...I'm sorry, I simply couldn't resist. >:3

sunxkissedxme haha, that was the signiture on my phone for a while, I got yelled at constantly until I changed it.
Jun 8, 2011
writeitalldown
Jun 7, 2011

Thank-you for your review!!

sunxkissedxme anytime..keep up the good work!
Jun 7, 2011

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