Young Writers Society

Hey, Shady! I feel lucky that I caught your story as you're starting anew again >:) Because now I can hop right in easy peasy. Jerica took a deep breath, ...

Hey Benji! :^) Finally getting around to a review. I'm going to comment on each lil excerpt individually, I think. Quoting just for clarity's sake and to help organize! "The ...

Hey, Parks! It looks like you’re pretty new here! Welcome to YWS! :^) And congrats on posting your second piece too! Getting right to the big picture - I think ...

Hey, fleuralpants! I know you posted this in like, May, but here I am with a review. In your description under the piece you mentioned that this was an old ...

Hey Juliet! Here to give this a read and a teeny review :^) I really enjoy your writing style. You have a really lovely way of stringing your words together ...

Hey foreveryoung! :^) I am here to review this poem because I love it, thank you. First off, I just want to gush because I love this imagery. The visual ...

Hey Eilis! I like this poem for what it is. It’s simple, easy to read, and straight to the point. The message is relatable and accessible which is great! I ...

Oh boy. I gotta be honest. I did not see this turn in the story coming and I'm not sure where this is heading. I'm interested to see how this ...

Hey there staph! Not sure if your username makes sense to shorten that way, lol, but I'm sticking to it! I quickly read through the previous chapters so that I ...

Hey Andrew! Just popping by to give this a little review and pop it out of the green room :) Though I didn't read the first poem you wrote, your ...

Hey Candygal! It looks like this work is in much need of some love and attention ;-; Sorry it's been neglected for so long, but I'm here to review it! ...

Hey! Just stopping by to say welcome back, but also to pop this out of the green room ;) Not sure if you meant to post this looking for reviews ...

Hey silent! I like this little poem! I like that it's short and sweet, and I think conceptually, the length on this works really well. Had it been drawn out ...

I suppose I could drop in and leave a review on a poem about the two of us ;) Neon signs, half lit, summon Rhiannon and I; Okay so this ...

Hey there Mel! This is a really sweet story about your friend. It sounds like Carson is a really cool guy, and I'm glad you have such a kind friend ...