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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before the Dragon - 1.1

    Hey, Shady! I feel lucky that I caught your story as you're starting anew again >:) Because now I can hop right in easy peasy. Jerica took a deep breath, ...

    Feb 27, 2023

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic
    Re: A compilation of Short writings

    Hey Benji! :^) Finally getting around to a review. I'm going to comment on each lil excerpt individually, I think. Quoting just for clarity's sake and to help organize! "The ...

    Feb 7, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Grace

    Hey, Parks! It looks like you’re pretty new here! Welcome to YWS! :^) And congrats on posting your second piece too! Getting right to the big picture - I think ...

    Dec 7, 2022

  • Other » Narrative, General
    Re: miserable mary (unfinished)

    Hey, fleuralpants! I know you posted this in like, May, but here I am with a review. In your description under the piece you mentioned that this was an old ...

    Sep 2, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative
    Re: Happy Birthday (edited) (Thrice- Ch.1)

    Hey Juliet! Here to give this a read and a teeny review :^) I really enjoy your writing style. You have a really lovely way of stringing your words together ...

    Dec 30, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Green is not always green

    Hey foreveryoung! :^) I am here to review this poem because I love it, thank you. First off, I just want to gush because I love this imagery. The visual ...

    Dec 30, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Health
    Re: Mirror

    Hey Eilis! I like this poem for what it is. It’s simple, easy to read, and straight to the point. The message is relatable and accessible which is great! I ...

    Jul 27, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Action / Adventure
    Re: Queen (Chp. 4)

    Oh boy. I gotta be honest. I did not see this turn in the story coming and I'm not sure where this is heading. I'm interested to see how this ...

    Dec 30, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Satire
    Re: Queen (Chp 3)

    Hey there staph! Not sure if your username makes sense to shorten that way, lol, but I'm sticking to it! I quickly read through the previous chapters so that I ...

    Dec 30, 2020

  • Poetry » Humor, Satire
    Re: A Follow up

    Hey Andrew! Just popping by to give this a little review and pop it out of the green room :) Though I didn't read the first poem you wrote, your ...

    Dec 30, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Twisted Adventures Of Veronica Finch: Game Over by Sylvia U.

    Hey Candygal! It looks like this work is in much need of some love and attention ;-; Sorry it's been neglected for so long, but I'm here to review it! ...

    Dec 29, 2020


  • Hey! Just stopping by to say welcome back, but also to pop this out of the green room ;) Not sure if you meant to post this looking for reviews ...

    Nov 14, 2020

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Stuff

    Hey silent! I like this little poem! I like that it's short and sweet, and I think conceptually, the length on this works really well. Had it been drawn out ...

    Nov 14, 2020

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Nocturnal Birds

    I suppose I could drop in and leave a review on a poem about the two of us ;) Neon signs, half lit, summon Rhiannon and I; Okay so this ...

    Jul 11, 2020

  • Short Story » Realistic, Other
    Re: Something he once said

    Hey there Mel! This is a really sweet story about your friend. It sounds like Carson is a really cool guy, and I'm glad you have such a kind friend ...

    Jul 11, 2020


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