Young Writers Society

The room's spinning. Twisting like carnival rides. Turning like wheels. Swiveling like heads. Like eyes. Like bodies, and arms, and legs, and feet. Like hands, and heads, and eyes. Like ...

Sorry for being so late with this. I've been really busy. School starts in two days and I'm trying to fit everything I can in. Dear Diary, First of all ...

These memories are fading away. And each time I recall one it rushes through me, sometimes causing a laugh (comma?) sometimes a sad wanting feeling that is the illness of ...

First of all, this began by reminding me of the journal of the doctor in Dracula, which is always a good. thing. Though a dreary read, it managed to have ...

Awesome cover - now I just wish I could see it... Make it larger next time please! Also, the word "ending" is the only word that isn't faded - maybe ...

I will agree, this was very good. Lots of feeling and definitively gave me a chill. No grammar or spelling mistakes. However, I do have a nitpick: you are TOO ...

Let me start off by saying I have never read the Harry Potter series, as it simply never appealed to me. I do not know its lore or characters, or ...

There she goes again (comma?) running five metres ahead of me. Her beanie pressed down against her blonde hair (that was?) neatly tied in a ponytail. When she insisted for ...

aturday June 5th Every fiber in my being screamed for him as I stood there silent, watching him walk away. I had to let him go. This wasn’t in the ...

Happy christmas and New Year to me. My mom has volunteered me to be a candy striper at the children’s hospital, says it’ll look good on my college application and ...

Countless rounds of trial and error did nothing to help Peter Waring understand what he could do to please his mother. (My life in a nutshell) He’d tricked Michael from ...

Having just finishing Infinity, my first thought when I read this is that it is very similar to the style of rhyming the witty book uses (I forget what it's ...

What a cute poem ^-^. Great style, great rhythm, great rhyming, Obviously Flower over there has never been in love before, teehee ^-^. This poem was styled very similarly to ...

Whoo! It RHYMES! So many people tell me it's overrated, but it's really underrated! Good job on that. I felt a good rythem throughout this piece. I don't really understand ...

Very good ^-^. I think a lot of us feel similarly about YWS (or have once before). I just have one complaint: too much description. It's like cutting a twig ...