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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1. The Kapoors

    Sure! Thanks for reviewing this!

    Jul 8, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1. The Kapoors

    Hello LittleLee! Thank you for the constructive feedback. And no you haven't offended me in any way. I will incorporate the changes suggested. To clarify your question, The school that ...

    Jun 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 1. The Kapoors

    Hello there! Thank you so much for the feedback. I will surely try and incorporate the changes suggested. Chapter 2 will be up in 3 days!!

    Jun 17, 2020


In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien