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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 4.1

    Hi Jack! Niteowl here to review again. But the detective couldn’t let anyone else get involved. Just their looks from up in Reilly’s office reminded him of how odd his ...

    Jan 26, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 3.3

    Hi Jack! Niteowl here to review again. He looked back once more towards the group to make sure no one could hear him say, “So Reilly, do you know something ...

    Jan 26, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 3.2

    Hi Jack! Niteowl here again, since I'm apparently reviewing this thing now even though I'm terrible at prose reviews. Okay, this is the funniest chapter so far. I've enjoyed the ...

    Jan 26, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 3.1

    Hi there Jack! Niteowl here again. Forcing the words out of his mouth and trying once more to grab at the young detective, Winslow managed to say, “It’s not good, ...

    Jan 26, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 2.4

    Hi Jack! Niteowl here to review again. Winslow shouldn’t have been so weak to let any sort of fit happen - especially something coming from something far worse that would ...

    Jan 26, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 2.3

    Hi there Jack! Niteowl here with a review for the Clear Sky Protocol this fine Review Day. Also Schadenfreude and fahrvergnügen for the Review Day Stats. :P Anyway, on to ...

    Jan 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 2.2

    Hi Jack! Niteowl here to get this out of the Green Room this fine Review Day! Overall, I like the humor in this chapter, from the dumb key pun to ...

    Jan 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 2.1

    So...this work has 1 comment and 2 reviews? That's weird, but anyway Niteowl here to review. “Hey Winslow! Would you like another cup of this swill?” "Would you like" seems ...

    Jan 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction
    Re: How Do You Plead: 1.3

    Hi there Jack! Niteowl here to review for the Clear Sky Protocol this fine Review Day! I did go read the previous chapters to get a sense of what's going ...

    Jan 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Science Fiction
    Re: Take Care ch. 3

    Hi there LilyPhelen! Niteowl here to help get this out of the Green Room this fine Review Day! Note: I did read the first two chapters, but I'm mainly reviewing ...

    Jan 25, 2020

  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: the blood of a butterfly

    Hi there Anamel! Niteowl here to review for the Clear Sky Protocol this fine Review Day! Overall, I think this is very interesting and has a lot of great imagery. ...

    Jan 25, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Other
    Re: The Talker 1 Chapter 1

    Hi there Chris Dixon! Niteowl here to review. One quick think I want to get out of the way...if that's your real name at the top, I'd remove it for ...

    Jan 23, 2020

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    Re: In Your Hands

    Hi there CamelGuy! Niteowl here to review. I'll start off by talking about the work and my interpretation, then getting into more specific comments. We start out with the declarative ...

    Jan 15, 2020


  • Hi there jf21! Welcome to YWS! Niteowl here with a quick review. Oh man, the classic "I want to move on but can't" poem. It's highly relatable because we've all ...

    Jan 12, 2020

  • Poetry » Other, Other
    Re: i don't love him anymore

    Hi alliyah! Niteowl here with a quick review. Overall, this feels more like something that needed to be written, but it's not the strongest start. The first few lines are ...

    Jan 10, 2020


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