Young Writers Society

Hi Ellie! Niteowl here for a quick review. Overall, this poem packs a powerful emotional punch. You can feel the pain of the speaker as she goes back in time ...

Hello Damian. Niteowl here to review. First, I'd like to note a couple larger issues that are keeping me from getting into the work. There's a heavy dialect in both ...

Hi there AvantCoffee! Niteowl here to review (and finally get my KotGR unicorn!). Overall, I really like this. It's the sort of poem that takes a mundane moment and brings ...

Hi there anne27! Niteowl here to leave a quick review. Overall, I think the theme of this piece is highly relatable and can make for a powerful statement on grief. ...

Hey there, sound! Nite here to review. Forgive me if I'm a bit rusty. So we'll start with the stuff I liked. First and last stanzas are powerful and the ...

Hi there Em16, Niteowl here to review! So overall, this poem confuses me. I feel like I'm reading two different poems, one about a relationship that ended but could be ...

Hi there CaptainJack! Niteowl here to review. I like the metaphors and imagery in this, but there's also a few spots I think could be cleaned up. So the first ...

Hi there! Niteowl here for a quick review. Ha! I actually had this same assignment a million years ago. I went with a Post-It note. Still one of my faves. ...

Hi there, TheScribe! Niteowl here to leave a quick review. Haha, the first poem I wrote for fun and eventually posted here was about mirrors, a rather subpar attempt at ...

Hi there veeren! Niteowl here to drop a quick review. First off, I love your voice and the music for this. I write lyrics but am really bad at the ...

Hi there yumi! Niteowl here to leave a quick review. Before I get into this, I'd just like to point out that given the language and the fact that this ...

Hi there yumi! Niteowl here to leave a quick review. Overall, I think the emotions here are heartfelt and well said. Having been in the situation of trying to help ...

Hi Lavvie! Niteowl here to leave a quick review on this lovely poem! As you are probably aware, since I believe you've reviewed some of my past poems, the subject ...

Hello again! First thought-Is Cassia really going to have to carry this bowl full of water through all these tunnels? Assuming the water itself is important (like this is magic ...

Hello! Back again to drop a review. You must work with this angel, but if she gets between you and the Treatise… well, just make sure it looks like an ...