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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: driving back from dinner

    Hi there AvantCoffee! Niteowl here to review (and finally get my KotGR unicorn!). Overall, I really like this. It's the sort of poem that takes a mundane moment and brings ...

    Feb 7, 2022

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: I Lost a Guru

    Hi there anne27! Niteowl here to leave a quick review. Overall, I think the theme of this piece is highly relatable and can make for a powerful statement on grief. ...

    Feb 6, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: a shade of red

    Hey there, sound! Nite here to review. Forgive me if I'm a bit rusty. So we'll start with the stuff I liked. First and last stanzas are powerful and the ...

    Jan 2, 2022

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical
    Re: Remember Me

    Hi there Em16, Niteowl here to review! So overall, this poem confuses me. I feel like I'm reading two different poems, one about a relationship that ended but could be ...

    Jun 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic
    Re: Warm Saturday Mornings

    Hi there CaptainJack! Niteowl here to review. I like the metaphors and imagery in this, but there's also a few spots I think could be cleaned up. So the first ...

    Jun 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    Re: Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blank

    Hi there! Niteowl here for a quick review. Ha! I actually had this same assignment a million years ago. I went with a Post-It note. Still one of my faves. ...

    May 8, 2021

  • Poetry » Culture, Health
    Re: The Mirror

    Hi there, TheScribe! Niteowl here to leave a quick review. Haha, the first poem I wrote for fun and eventually posted here was about mirrors, a rather subpar attempt at ...

    Apr 14, 2021

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: white lies and campfires

    Hi there veeren! Niteowl here to drop a quick review. First off, I love your voice and the music for this. I write lyrics but am really bad at the ...

    Mar 22, 2021

  • Article / Essay » Review, Historical Fiction
    Re: "Leaving Neverland" (Michael Jackson "Documentary")

    Hi there yumi! Niteowl here to leave a quick review. Before I get into this, I'd just like to point out that given the language and the fact that this ...

    Jan 4, 2021

  • Other » Romantic, Spiritual
    Re: Depression Cuts

    Hi there yumi! Niteowl here to leave a quick review. Overall, I think the emotions here are heartfelt and well said. Having been in the situation of trying to help ...

    Jan 4, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Health
    Re: maniac

    Hi Lavvie! Niteowl here to leave a quick review on this lovely poem! As you are probably aware, since I believe you've reviewed some of my past poems, the subject ...

    Dec 14, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 3, Part 2

    Hello again! First thought-Is Cassia really going to have to carry this bowl full of water through all these tunnels? Assuming the water itself is important (like this is magic ...

    Dec 5, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 3, Part 1

    Hello! Back again to drop a review. You must work with this angel, but if she gets between you and the Treatise… well, just make sure it looks like an ...

    Dec 5, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 2, Part 2

    Hello again! Nite here to finish Chapter 2! Normally, Micah listened carefully to every one of his Ministers, even if he disagreed. But this time when Raphel, Irin, and Cassia ...

    Nov 28, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 2, Part 1

    Hi Mea! Nite back to attack Chapter Two! I did read this quickly the other day, but I'll dive in deeper now. Thoughts as I go, then any overall points ...

    Nov 28, 2020


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