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  • hey herb! i'm finally here with the review you requested; sorry for taking so long to deliver it :) i love this poem so much! i love the contrast between ...

    May 20, 2024

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: What Your Words Taught Me

    hello! momo here with a review :) oh. my. gosh. ellie. this poem hurt my SOUL. it's so good and way too relatable. your words are so carefully crafted and ...

    Dec 4, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: Who She Became

    hello! momo here with a review for this amazing poem :) wow. i can't really explain how this poem makes me feel, but i love it so much. i've read ...

    Dec 3, 2023

  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Lyrical
    Re: This is Creepypasta

    hello! momo here with a review :) i don't know anything about creepypasta, but i've heard of it, and i really enjoyed reading this parody! you rhymed the lyrics very ...

    Dec 2, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other
    Re: Blink

    hello! momo here with a review :) i really enjoyed reading this! you describe everything so beautifully and in such detail that i can see the picture you're painting in ...

    Dec 1, 2023

  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Narrative
    Re: clueless

    hello! momo here with a review :) i really enjoyed this poem! i haven't seen the movie clueless, but this poem still made sense even though i hadn't and was ...

    Sep 9, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: variations on a theme of sadness

    hey yosh! momo here with a review. wow. just wow. this poem is amazing. i love how you don't try to be super metaphorical and mysterious, and instead use more ...

    Jun 23, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Sunny and the Algorithms of Gloom: Chapter 3.1

    hey mint! momo here with a review :) this chapter was very interesting! i know nothing about programming or coding, and i haven't read previous chapters, but i think i ...

    Jun 16, 2023

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Literature
    Re: Woman in Black

    hello! momo here with a review :) i loved reading this! men in black is such a great series, and you captured the vibe of the movies very well in ...

    Jun 14, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Writing Like I'm Running Out of Time

    hello! momo here with a review. i like this poem a lot! it definitely was giving hamilton vibes which i am HERE for. i love how the whole poem feels ...

    Jun 2, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Experiences: Seven

    hello! momo here with a review for you :) i really like this poem! it's slightly sad, but captures the bittersweet feeling as well. it makes me think of graduating ...

    Jun 1, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 12.1

    hey silver! momo here with a review. i haven't written a review in a while, so apologies if this is really bad haha. i also haven't read previous chapters, but ...

    May 28, 2023


  • hey silver! it's momo with a review for review day :) (also i haven't written a review in a very long time so i'm sorry if this is bad >.< ...

    Dec 16, 2022


  • hay alliyah! i'm here with a review! my reviewing skills are a bit rusty, so this might be awful, but here goes c: i absolutely loved this poem! i loved ...

    Aug 15, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Soil of misery

    hello! i'm here with a review for this poem as requested c: i loved reading this! it was sad, but it was very well written. my favorite line was Turn ...

    May 28, 2022


A cynic is a man who knows the price of everything, and the value of nothing.
— Oscar Wilde