mephistophelesangel has been a member of the Young Writers Society since Oct 20 2013. They have made 161 posts and 94 reviews. Please take the time to welcome them to YWS!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
