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  • Other » Historical Fiction, Realistic
    Re: A diary entry in the role of a woman in World War 2

    Hi! Manilla here for a review. Let's get into it! What a lovely portray of an important, forgotten perspective - that of a common citizen, and that of a woman. ...

    May 23, 2021

  • Poetry » Chickens, Dramatic
    Re: dishwasher poem

    Hi! So I'm trying to get my May review challenge done...Don't mind me :,) Very creative poem - not all the time we see artful pieces like this one. Clever ...

    May 23, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Models of Clay

    Hi, Manilla here for a review. I'll start by analyzing your poem from a reader's POV. Let's get into it! Waves goodbye, necks snap and break. Like lockets cracked- identities ...

    May 5, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Welcome To wonderland pt 3

    Hi! Manilla here for this May's review challenge. Let's get into it! I read the first and second installments of "Welcome to Wonderland", and briefly, I will give you my ...

    Apr 30, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Where the sky meets the Earth, part 1

    Hi, Manilla here for a review. Let's get right into it! Very interesting premise so far - a satanic ritual among some friends in a very creepy, very sus location ...

    Apr 19, 2021

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: white lies and campfires

    Alright! Wow! Music-related things out of the way first. 1) Can I cover this? I sing a bit and play the piano, and this is such a gorgeous tune. 2) ...

    Mar 24, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic
    Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 7.1

    Hello, Manilla here for a review - I'm a bit rusty (haven't done one in over half a year), but let's get into it! So this is what I know ...

    Feb 19, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Politics
    Re: Hot Riot Summer

    Hi, manilla here for a review! This is a poem of and for the ages. It is unique and describes your experience in art today. It is vague enough to ...

    Jun 6, 2020

  • Other » Dramatic, Supernatural
    Re: Llwyd Castilla

    Hey! Manilla here for a review. At first glance I see an intimidating, hunky villain that might grab the attention of the narrator. The setting, a "shadowy night" adds to ...

    Apr 30, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: Butterfly Wings - Chapter 13 - Raw

    Hi! Manilla here for a review. Let's get right into it, shall we? Disclaimer that I have not read any of the previous installments before, so I'll be looking at ...

    Apr 18, 2020

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: purpose

    Hi! Manilla here for a review. Let's get right into it, shall we? I have so many good things to say about this poem. First and foremost, you have succeeded ...

    Apr 17, 2020

  • Art » Fantasy, Dramatic
    Re: The Dance

    Hi! Manilla here for a review. Let's get right into it, shall we? This sounds like a movie trailer to me, not a typical prose story. So therefore, I'll review ...

    Apr 16, 2020

  • Poetry » Humor, Satire
    Re: A Metaphor for War

    Hey! Manilla here for a review. As a reader There was a fun twist at the end and your specific word choice helps really build up the dramatic yet heartening ...

    Oct 10, 2019

  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: The Yellow Wristwatch

    Forgive me, I haven’t reviewed in awhile, so this may be more of an analysis and opinion than anything. This was stunning, putting us in the eyes of a perspective ...

    Sep 10, 2019

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: One sided love

    Hi! Manilla here for a review. Let's get right into it, shall we? As a reader For me[,] hun, you're the sun. I understand the rhyme, but "hun" breaks the ...

    Jun 12, 2019


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