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Thankyou for the feedback :) I appreciate it

Thank you so much for your criticism, I will change the errors and add your suggestions. :)

I really like this poem. It's sort of frustrating because of the degree of authenticity.

BEAUTIFUL piece of literature.

This poem is really deep and moving; it's written in very simple English which for me is a very good thing. It somehow make sit more relative to people. Everyone ...

No not at all. Your criticism is very helpful, though harsh but very true; i understand where you are coming from and I want to get better. Thank you!

thank you for your feedback :) its very humbling to have people praise my work and I'll try not to let you down thank you.

This poem is very short, sweet and simple. It has a common feel of loss, that I think everyone experiences. I really liked and enjoyed this poem even if it ...

This poem for is very interesting. I didn't expect the title to be linked to something so, sorrowfully adventurous, if that makes sense. However I was pleasantly surprised.

thank you so much I appreciate this a lot.

No disrespect to your review but if you've read the previous chapters then it wouldn't be as cliche as you think. However thank you for taking your time to read ...

This poem really makes me laugh in a way. I'm not sure if that's what you wanted me to feel, but I laughed in a good way. It makes me ...

thank you for your comment

I added your improvements and corrected the errors. Thanks for the review and chapter 2 is already out

thank you so much for your comment. I will work on my commas, it's one of my flaws in writing.