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I'm not really a good editor, or really even a poet, but that was good. I liked it!

Oh no, thank you for the critisism! I guess I'm always one for always knowing what's happening so it's good that you pointed it out. I tried to fix it ...

OMG! Thankyou!!! I reread my story so far and I thought it was stupid so I was going to give up on it but since you said that I feel ...

Wow, I really liked that so far. Of course there is always room for improvement but I thought it was good! Kepp going, I'll be looking forward to read more!