hopeless03

ok dont wait so long like last time

thanks and i had to read this to my class it was funny to see there reactions to it. it was really fun to write as well

Ok I just have to say this I wrote this like 2 years ago. I didn't really know how to write well and I haven't really looked at it much ...

OK I will edit as soon as I can. Thanks for the review it helps a lot.

I tried to fix what I could tell me what you think. Thanks for the review

I fixed what I could on here so tell me if you think it is any better

This is really good, I really like how it started out. The way it ended was way different to how it started and i like that. You could have added ...