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Re: These walls
Hi, hopeless03 here to give a review! First off I just wanted to say that... Oh my this is a great poem! And it has great grammar and spelling, you ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: A rape story.
Hello hopeless here to give a review to you! Here we go! So first off... Why? This is not a happy or nice subject, but I would expect you to ...
Jan 29, 2014 -
Re: I Wanted
Hey there hopeless here to give you a review. So I would like to start out by saying that this is a good poem, though you could have worded it ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: Bloody Tears
Hey there hopeless here to give you a review. Let me start out by saying this is a really good poem, I like how it's worded. You have good grammer ...
Dec 13, 2013 -
Re: The Church is Bloodstained
Hey hopeless03 here to give a review. Wow this... This right here speaks for a lot. Just this little bit says so much, this is really good. I don't know ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: Mating Tears
Hello hopeless03 here to give you a review:D I liked they names they had, they were very different. And I liked that, you also had good grammar and spelling. This ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: I'm a Little Writer
Hey there hopeless here to give you a review. So I wanted to start off by saying this is a really good poem. And your punctuation is very good. I ...
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: Drunk
Hey there hopeless here to give you a review. So I wanted to start off by saying I love this poem it is very good. I also wanted to say ...
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: The wolf that's ready to run
Hello hopless03 here to give you a review! This was a cute little story and i loved it. I wish it explained a little bit more but its still good. ...
Nov 7, 2013 -
Re: jn
Hey hopeless03 here, I like your poem it was interesting and I think it's just short enough. Any longer and I don't think I would like it as much as ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Witch Hunt
Hello hopeless03 here to review, This is very interesting and I love it, but it would be better with some back ground to it. Like a little more on what ...
Oct 9, 2013 -
Re: Just like You
Hi Hopeless03 here, just thought i say that this is a great poem. I love it, it shows off how well you can write, you have a talent. I bet ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Take our bones, make us new
Hi Hopeless03 here, just thought i say this is very good and i love how you posted it in the fall. This is very interesting to me and i love ...
Oct 7, 2013
