gokubrother

Salutations from the ice cream aisle, bluewaterlily! I've stumbled upon Breaking Point and I do have to admit that I was entertained. In the good way, of course. The opening ...

Alas, 'tis I, gokubrother. This is a bit of an old work, but I happened to stumble upon it whilst perusing the dark logs of successfully reviewed works in the ...

Alas, 'tis I gokubrother. Let's go right into the review, shall we? First off, I liked your short story because I love it when people personify seasons. Also, I liked ...

Alas, 'tis I gokubrother. Let's go right into the review, shall we? I like your piece because shows there's a lot of emotion behind its conception, but that's also the ...

Merry Christmas in July! It's your Secret Santa again to review this post as well. To start off, I'm really enjoying these conversations and dialogues that explore the inner mental ...

Merry Christmas in July! Your Secret Santa here to review this work. First of all, I want to say that I liked how you played out the situation where a ...

I liked your poem, but I feel a bit unfulfilled. In a way that I didn't enjoy it as well as I know I could. I feel as if this ...

Buenas! Me gustó mucho y me identifico con este texto. War tears us all apart. Our families, our ideals, and even our very nation. Lo mas que me gusta es ...

Viva la revolucion, Vale! Diaaaablo. Me animaste con eso. Todavia lo siento. Te pregunto que fue tu inspiracion. Pero ademas de eso, me confundi en algunas partes. Hay unas partes ...

Me fascino! (creo que se esbribe asi) Este poema te quedo super chevere; de la forma que lo escribiste (primero explicando tu arbol, despues la falta del espiritu navide~o y ...

Hmm... Nostalgic. I think I can relate to that. An unfullfilled yearn. I liked it though, but it seems a little monotone. Maybe adding some adjectives will help bring the ...

Me gusto el poema. El tema del mismo no es uno muy comun. Nice! El titulo lo redacto bastante bien, fijate. Algo que me fije y que me gusto es ...

Sinceramente, me gusto. pero hay ciertos puntos que encuentro que no fluyen muy bien tus palabras. Ejemplos: "It's a lonely halo, warming your lonely soul" La repeticion de la palabra ...

I couoldn't understand your poem very well. It took reading it five times and looking at Abid's comment to understand it. It's too short. I didn't get enough time to ...

Hmm... Well, first of all: welcome to YWS!! Second: the story. I found it to be nice actually. At the beginning I got confused a little as to the strange ...