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So simple, but so true. I know how you feel. Life isn't easy. It seems like I can't go a day without having to face these feelings. I loved this ...

It was really simple but I loved it!! I liked how you used the short phrases and bits throughout the entire thing; that's how i think most of the time ...

It was really creepy but in a good way and it's a piece that makes you think, always something i like. You've got a really distinct voice. I'm looking forward ...

whoops that wasnt supposed to be one giant mass of writing...ill make sure to seperate it next time. Thanks so much for the feedback :)

I thought it was amazing, i love your writing style. For a first time writing poetry, you nailed it :) Keep up the good work

This started out as a school project for my history class when we were learning about the Greeks and Romans. I was really bored one day, this was when I ...

Very well done, loved the description and it would make for an amazing novel. Your writing reminds me of my own; you should check out my work sometime.