fluteluvr77 has been a member of the Young Writers Society since Jan 27 2009. They have made 350 posts and 107 reviews. Please take the time to welcome them to YWS!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
