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whispering my name into the vicious wind

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: soft spoken

    hi fig! please excuse any typos during this review, i ak using my phone rn,,, the death of something. you are spectating, surrounding someone, and yet they are no longer ...

    Jan 31, 2025

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: death that waits is a woman

    hi chi i'm reviewing this, sigh. excuse any typos i am on mobile writing this,,, anothet jade poem! i see you have been thinking about her, interesting. in the past, ...

    Jan 31, 2025

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: you've haunted me all my life

    hi diss (hello, chi) time to review this poem, sigh. wow immediate jade mention! i wonder who this poem is about. anyway, her being your light-- the memory lingering. interesting. ...

    Jan 20, 2025

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Politics
    Re: Lullaby for the Gemini

    hello, hildegardhope. i've come to review this poem. i haven't brushed up on my greek mythology recently, but this is definitely deeply greek-rooted. boyhood to manhood, hm. that is ever-present ...

    Jan 17, 2025

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Tired

    hello iliketrains666, i'm here to review your poem. it's definitely saying something-- through exauhstion and inability to do something, but i'm not sure what you're trying to say here-- sure, ...

    Jan 17, 2025

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: young and helpless

    hi lullaby . herb here, to review your poem. immediate notice of pity/loss - pathetic, pay me any attention, drained, notice, margins, fool. you set us (readers) up for a ...

    Jan 6, 2025

  • Short Story » Realistic, General
    Re: Banana Bread

    hi @angstyteen. i'm herb, here to review this short story. it's clear that there's the sense of absence, this slow, grieving mourning of our speaker's mother. perhaps it is yours, ...

    Jan 6, 2025

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Clay

    hi ash! herb here to review your poem. on first glance, this is a piece about love/falling out of love, and you make it akin to clay-- which i found ...

    Jan 5, 2025

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Jacket

    Hi logan! Herb here to review your wonderful piece of poetry~! Let's begin. You keep it sweet and short, and i enjoy that. I think it's very interestingly formatted. it's ...

    Dec 29, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical
    Re: satiety

    hello soundo mynd! time to review this last poem in your sisyphean(?) collection, satiety. THAT TITLE THOUGH? stunned from the beginning! let's start :P okay. you start out with the ...

    Dec 8, 2024

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General
    Re: Mocha Tea

    hello taost! i'm herb, here to review your wonderful lyrics :) there's this sense of disappearance, the fleeting-ness of cafe dates, and flowers, is something i find interesting! i almost ...

    Dec 8, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: I look around (Vent..? again)

    hello @ILikeTrains666! i'm herb, here to review your lovely poem. let's begin. you keep this constant repetition, looking around. fearful. this imminence is present and boy is it strong. you ...

    Dec 4, 2024

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic
    Re: break

    hi sound, herb here for poem round two. i'm excited?!?! fyi i'm reading this as i am reviewing but i'll also read over twice and give two seperate thoughts. first ...

    Dec 4, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: where i end and you begin

    okay. hi chi! it's me. here to review this absolutely jaw dropping poem. as always, you keep this sheer rawness and almost blunt aspect. ever so anatomical and deathly. the ...

    Dec 4, 2024

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic
    Re: bear it

    hi sound! i thought i'd stop by to take a peek at your poetry!!!! ugh, the title combined with the sheer heaviness / weight in this poem is actually stunning. ...

    Dec 3, 2024


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