whispering my name into the vicious wind
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hi fig! please excuse any typos during this review, i ak using my phone rn,,, the death of something. you are spectating, surrounding someone, and yet they are no longer ...
Jan 31, 2025
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hi chi i'm reviewing this, sigh. excuse any typos i am on mobile writing this,,, anothet jade poem! i see you have been thinking about her, interesting. in the past, ...
Jan 31, 2025
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hi diss (hello, chi) time to review this poem, sigh. wow immediate jade mention! i wonder who this poem is about. anyway, her being your light-- the memory lingering. interesting. ...
Jan 20, 2025
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hello, hildegardhope. i've come to review this poem. i haven't brushed up on my greek mythology recently, but this is definitely deeply greek-rooted. boyhood to manhood, hm. that is ever-present ...
Jan 17, 2025
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hello iliketrains666, i'm here to review your poem. it's definitely saying something-- through exauhstion and inability to do something, but i'm not sure what you're trying to say here-- sure, ...
Jan 17, 2025
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hi lullaby . herb here, to review your poem. immediate notice of pity/loss - pathetic, pay me any attention, drained, notice, margins, fool. you set us (readers) up for a ...
Jan 6, 2025
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hi @angstyteen. i'm herb, here to review this short story. it's clear that there's the sense of absence, this slow, grieving mourning of our speaker's mother. perhaps it is yours, ...
Jan 6, 2025
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hi ash! herb here to review your poem. on first glance, this is a piece about love/falling out of love, and you make it akin to clay-- which i found ...
Jan 5, 2025
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Hi logan! Herb here to review your wonderful piece of poetry~! Let's begin. You keep it sweet and short, and i enjoy that. I think it's very interestingly formatted. it's ...
Dec 29, 2024
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hello soundo mynd! time to review this last poem in your sisyphean(?) collection, satiety. THAT TITLE THOUGH? stunned from the beginning! let's start :P okay. you start out with the ...
Dec 8, 2024
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hello taost! i'm herb, here to review your wonderful lyrics :) there's this sense of disappearance, the fleeting-ness of cafe dates, and flowers, is something i find interesting! i almost ...
Dec 8, 2024
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hello @ILikeTrains666! i'm herb, here to review your lovely poem. let's begin. you keep this constant repetition, looking around. fearful. this imminence is present and boy is it strong. you ...
Dec 4, 2024
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hi sound, herb here for poem round two. i'm excited?!?! fyi i'm reading this as i am reviewing but i'll also read over twice and give two seperate thoughts. first ...
Dec 4, 2024
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okay. hi chi! it's me. here to review this absolutely jaw dropping poem. as always, you keep this sheer rawness and almost blunt aspect. ever so anatomical and deathly. the ...
Dec 4, 2024
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hi sound! i thought i'd stop by to take a peek at your poetry!!!! ugh, the title combined with the sheer heaviness / weight in this poem is actually stunning. ...
Dec 3, 2024
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